Comments | romanceguru: What Makes a Man

romanceguru

What Makes a Man

Apr 29, 2007 20:23

Title: What Makes a Man
Author: romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is boss.
Rating: PG-13 language
Characters: Jayne
Prompt: “Hide” for ( Read more... )

jayne, drabble, fic, firefly

Comments 14

cmk418 April 30 2007, 04:01:02 UTC

That's wonderful and sweet. I especially love the last sentence. Great job with the prompt.

romanceguru April 30 2007, 19:11:34 UTC

Thank you. Jayne’s guardedness is intriguing to me. : )

anonymous April 30 2007, 05:20:09 UTC

D'aw.... I quite like that. Very sweet. XD

anjelchan April 30 2007, 05:23:17 UTC

Er... that was me.. Apparently I forgot to log in....

romanceguru April 30 2007, 18:59:58 UTC

No problem, it happens. Thank you! : )

crazywriterchic April 30 2007, 20:26:34 UTC

This was good! I liked the little look into Jayne's brain post-Miranda--without all the baggage of an entire fic behind it. Nice, nice!

romanceguru May 1 2007, 20:20:39 UTC

Jayne don’t like baggage no how. Thanks! That’s why I love drabbles. Straight to the point. : )

karanina May 1 2007, 02:46:49 UTC

Still waters run deep, I guess... or maybe not so still... Jayne's not exactly the strong silent type, is he...

But I always like a Jayne who's trying to redeem himself! It's so sexy!

romanceguru May 1 2007, 20:30:52 UTC

Anything Jayne does is sexy! Just picking his teeth gets me off... ;-p

ceslas May 1 2007, 03:16:21 UTC

No one seemed ta notice much that he took extra care not ta speak outta turn or say the thoughts that wanted ta be said.

romanceguru May 1 2007, 20:32:21 UTC

Thank you! Sometimes I fear I over romanticize. But hey what can you do?