Escape Ch.6

[romanceguru]

Title: Escape (6/?)
Series: First Love
Author: Romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is boss, I am but a lowly subservient.
Rating:  PG-13  (These two are a little violent)
Summary: River and Jayne kick some bootie, and blow some shite up!
Notes: Beta done by the lovely Elsibet34!
For all that came before: Read me

After aptly securing their captor in the same

Comments

[jynnantonnyx28]

LOL love the "do I look faaat?" comment

[romanceguru]

Thank you, I can see River misinterpreting the Jayne leer. ; )

[princat]

"Do I look fat?" & "He is all squishy underneath..."
Best lines ever. Still giggling....

[romanceguru]

Merci! I'm so happy River could warrant some laughs!

[angel932]

You write the action scenes really well!

[romanceguru]

Thank you for the vote of confidence! I was a little worried going into it, I had to channel my dark and violent side. More so for the next chapter. ; )

[fairandbright]

Do I look fat? is so reminiscent of Summer asking Joss if her cryo-box made her look fat, lol! Great chapter, action packed with a hint of future romance blooming!

[romanceguru]

Ha! You have discovered my inspiration! When I first heard that on the commentary, I almost died from laughter! Yes, more romance on the horizon, slow and steady wins the race!

[fairandbright]

Hehe, I'm a good guesser!

[calijirl5150]

“Jayne? For trade?” Wash questioned in disbelief. “First he gets a town, now people want to sell his hide on the black market? Baby-cakes, I’m good enough to be kidnapped and sold as contraband, right?”

“Top grade stuff.” Zoë reassured her husband

You have everyone's voices down pat, & this is just one perfect exmple.

Great job.

[romanceguru]

You know, that line was the one I was agonizing over. I didn’t know If I was pushing it or not. You just made me one happy girl!

[calijirl5150]

Did ya do the "Snoopy Dance" ? LOL

[romanceguru]

The Macarena! ; )