LJ Idol, Topic 15: “Busman’s Holiday”

[roina_arwen]

“I can’t wait to see you this weekend,” Helena stated. “It seems like forever since we last spent any real time together

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[roina_arwen]

Thanks

[adoptedwriter]

I’ve been to Hell too! My kid was 4. She went up to the dude in the devil suit at the post office that he was “going down”! Lol.

[roina_arwen]

Kids are awesome! Thanks for reading!

[bleodswean]

You've got such a deft way with dialogue and expressions of affection. This was so cheery....but then!!!! Hell???

[roina_arwen]

Aww, thank you! Yes, Hell is a real place in the Cayman Islands! I also had fun with placing Helena in Paradise Island, and Angelo in Hell, lol. Thanks for reading!

[tonithegreat]

I’ve been to Purgatory in the San Juans, but you still surprised me with where you were going with this! Everything fell into place perfectly just as I finished the piece. Well done!

[roina_arwen]

Thank you so much, and thanks for reading!

[karmasoup]

The "Helena" and "Angelo," the red suitcase, the white sweater... all little Chekhov's guns to make me wonder if this was where you were headed... no one else would permit their respective superiors to limit their love life to one night every four years! Nicely done. ;-)

[roina_arwen]

Exactly so! One weekend every four years isn’t much, but it’s better than nothing. Thanks for reading!