Epitaph 1 and 1/2--A Dollhouse Fic

[rogoblue]

Rating: R (language)

Summary: It’s the Thoughtpocylpse. Caroline is ensconced at Safe Haven. DeWitt delivers a message to Dominic on her behalf in order to make a request of her own.

Comments

[marzipanilla]

She wants him to get Topher back. The one to trust for something important.

I like that this is them just having the chance to meet up and be who they would be around each other in this scenario. It makes a lot of sense that they didn't sleep together and just have that weird lingering tension.

Dom's little group were great characters.

[rogoblue]

Wow! That was a fast read.

Adelle came to someone who she thought could discover Topher's whereabouts and would have some incentive to look in a meaningful way.

I like them meeting up and seeing what's the same and what's different about their lives now. Adelle assessing what he needed came out of nowhere but it rang true to me that she still had that ability. In this scenario, you're right. They hadn't had sex but there was some tension in the aftermath of him missing the vodka and there certainly is here.

I like surrounding Dom with eclectic groups. I couldn't tell you why. Maybe it's because they're fun to write.

Thanks, as always, for reading and taking the time to comment.

[darling_ashes]

This was perfect!

[rogoblue]

What can I do for an encore then?:)

Kidding. Thanks so much for the kind words!

[dreamaway78]

Very Interesting. Really liking it so far.

[rogoblue]

There is a sequel. Must edit. Must edit. Must edit.

[sivonni]

Are you still editing? Because I must know what happens next.

[rogoblue]

I completely forgot about this. Got involved in other projects and now am on vacation. Give me a little more time and I'll produce the sequel. I promise!

[sivonni]

I'll be waiting!