Fic: Give Me Novocain

Sep 18, 2010 00:09


Title: Give Me Novocain
Author: rofro05
Disclaimer: I don't own em and don't make any money off of em.
Warnings: Violence and Puck's dirty mouth
Word Count: 3980
Rating: R
Summary: Hummel was invincible, right?
A/N: This is a fill for a prompt from the angst meme that totalgleekgirl posted back in May and that I've been working on ever since. But ( Read more... )

r, puck/kurt, oneshot, glee fanfiction

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shamelessbrie September 18 2010, 18:37:40 UTC
This was really good! I could practically feel Puck's feelings of guilt through out the story, both boys were very much in-character! Totally awesome job!!

One thing I noticed - “Epically then.” Kurt responded firmly.

I think you mean “Especially then.” Kurt responded firmly.

At least, 'especially' would make more sense anyways hehe.

Sorry spelling freakazoid moment over haha. This was seriously totally awesome :-)

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carolinecrane September 18 2010, 18:48:37 UTC
Loved this line:

And we all know how he feels about my suspenders, like deep down on the inside. Or you know, not so deep down. And really not so much on the inside either.

Very nice!

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sony_kit82 September 19 2010, 06:35:25 UTC
I just loved the simple and subtle intensity in this fic. The way the emotions were all riled up but were never explosive was really well done. That Puck came to his own realizations slowly, perhaps grudgingly, but no doubt genuinely was a wonderful sight to behold. Kurt's self-sufficiency will really get him in trouble and I hope he accepts that people also want to take care of him. His character was sad but strong and that he never played the victim was admirable. :D

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totalgleekgirl September 21 2010, 00:26:30 UTC
Oh my goodness, I prompted this so long ago, I couldn't actually remember what it was until I got the movement part lol! This was fantastic as always peaches! I always love your work, you know this.

I love how fiercely protective Mercedes was, and Artie's line about his suspenders and Kurt's hate of them.

Really great work love, thanks for filling it for me!

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