"Nature Wins" a 'Being Human' fanfic (mature scenes)

Mar 14, 2008 20:54

Title: Nature wins.

Author: Keenir

Beta: Master_Kogane

(all errors are my own, added to the final, post-beta draft)

Pairing(s): George/OFC Millie

Character(s): George, Annie; OFC Millie.

Rating: Mature (nothing much more graphic than the pilot; but just to be sure...)

Disclaimer: None of them are mine, except for Millie, who I’d be ( Read more... )

being human fanfiction, being human, annie

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master_kogane March 15 2008, 04:42:56 UTC
Really like your take on the werewolves, how the infection happens, and finally, what it implies!

And the Annie/George interaction was very nice and friendship-y!

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freeze883 March 15 2008, 21:07:02 UTC
Right I went into this thinking non-canon characters are stupid, but this kinda won me over. So non-canon characters are only mostly stupid from now on.

I did really like how the curse being passed on by sex fitted really well with the AIDS metaphor subtext thingy in the pilot during the George/Julia scenes.

I also really liked the werewolves thinning out the vampires bit, it fits really well with the classic vampire/werewolf relationship you get in a lot of horror stories

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fififolle March 16 2008, 08:19:57 UTC
Whee! That was fascinating! but Millie - how could you?! I like the whole idea of werewolves thinning vampires, how ironic! Excellent.

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rodlox March 16 2008, 10:18:03 UTC
>Whee!
*is pleased you like*

> That was fascinating!
thank you.

> but Millie - how could you?!
{could she be more specific? I can't tell if that's a sound of sympathy or accusation?}
I'll ask. Fi?

> I like the whole idea of werewolves thinning vampires, how ironic!
I like irony.

> Excellent

:D

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fififolle March 16 2008, 10:39:11 UTC
Sorry :) She infected him? That's terrible! No?

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you see what I have to put up with? :) rodlox March 16 2008, 10:46:42 UTC
{ah. much clearer. no offense taken}

well, except for stories where werewolves give birth to werewolves, pretty much every werewolf story/movie is about infection....but I didn't want to have it just be "turns into wolf after being bitten" or "after being clawed".

that's when Millie showed up.

{you forgot to mention that George and I cared for one another}
I don't think she forgot, Millie; that's how George got infected, after all.
{I told you to mention that I was dying; but no, you said it would be enough to allude to it.... American tosser!}

we apologize, Fi.
{true - I apologize for Rodlox being scum [in this instance]}

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