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[rodlox]

which line is better?

There was a fork in the road. The sign for one of the roads read:
‘THE LONG (way/road).
‘Warning: Sidewalk Ends.’

Comments

[pygmymuse]

Well... I think I'd change the first part so it went...

There was a fork in the road. The sign for one of the paths read:

And then I would probably use road after "The long" because I haven't ever seen a long way sign...

It does make me wonder if you want some kind of... "Last services for 59 miles" type sign or something as well.

[rodlox]

thank you.

(there'd be no need for service, as there's nothing more advanced than carriages in the world of OUAT)
-
well, I'm using several sources:

-Frost's poem about a road diverging.
-the book title 'Where the sidewalk ends'.
-the phrase "taking the long way (around)".
-the Troll Bridge (which is the other option)

also, nice to hear from you. I hope all is well.

[pygmymuse]

You're welcome.

I love Where the Sidewalk Ends.

Maybe one way says Long Way, XX amount of distance in OUAT terms... (I don't know as I only saw a bit of the pilot) and the other one says "Sidewalk Ends."

Thanks. I've been around, a bit, but not much, and usually occupied with original fiction... Haven't done any fan things in a while, but mostly things are... good.

[sabaceanbabe]

I'd go with "Warning: Sidewalk Ends."