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Primeval 'athon: "Conservation"

Feb 15, 2011 21:29

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Title: Conservation.
Fandom: Primeval.
For: Ssw_loved in the Conbykink Baby!ficathon (someone said "ficathon" where I could hear them ( Read more... )

emily merchant, abby, connor temple, creature, abby maitland, primeval fanfiction, primeval, emily, connor, becker

Comments 9

ssw_loved February 16 2011, 02:48:39 UTC

Eee! This is fantastic, I loved your take on this! And the one that they named Lester made me smile, even though that meant Lester was dead. I loved that you used a future setting for this, awesome!

rodlox February 16 2011, 02:56:14 UTC

>Eee! This is fantastic, I loved your take on this!
thank you.
it was fun to write.

though I'm still writing the other one for you.

> And the one that they named Lester made me smile,
I thought to myself "i doubt they'd name someone Lester if the tyke's sucking on toes."

>even though that meant Lester was dead
yeah, I don't think Lester permits intrusions into his territory. as evidence, I cite Leek, Christine, and dave.

>I loved that you used a future setting for this,
so many ways to handle the "the world was sterilized" comment Matt made, and this mentions a few.
(that and those giant wasps annoyed pretty much everyone in the fandom, I think)

ssw_loved February 16 2011, 03:38:25 UTC

The more fics, the merrier! ;)

Oh, Lester definitely will NOT allow people in his territory.

quoththewriter February 16 2011, 02:50:20 UTC

Ohhh, interesting take on the prompt for sure! I really liked this. The future world has so much potential for fic! Your version is an interesting one.

"Which one's Lester?" <3

rodlox February 16 2011, 02:58:07 UTC

>I really liked this.
many thanks.

if you would like to set something in that future world, please do.

><3
thank you. I knew Abby would never conceede defeat, but she might admit to a faint interest, a minute curiosity...for Connor's sake, of course. :)

tay_21 February 16 2011, 03:56:47 UTC

What a unique take on those prompts. I can tell you're big into scifi. Bravo for you!

The Barrie line at the end was classic. Lots and lots of babies.

rodlox February 17 2011, 09:33:26 UTC

thank you.

if I didn't like scifi, Primeval would have sent me screaming for a bomb shelter. :)

I honestly didn't know how to end the story...then I remembered Peter Pan. :)

ladycat713 February 17 2011, 07:08:56 UTC

Very interesting take on kink. It makes me think of old school sci fi favorites (danger human do not touch comes to mind for some reason although there was only one human being kept and not a human zoo, I can't remember the one with the zoo since I'm terrible with titles) . You meshed things nicely here.It has a lot of potential to become a fic series.

rodlox February 17 2011, 09:31:43 UTC

thank you for the reply.

>Very interesting take on kink.
thank you.

> It makes me think of old school sci fi favorites (danger human do not touch comes to mind for some reason
sadly, I don't remember that. sorry.

> although there was only one human being kept and not a human zoo, I can't remember the one with the zoo since I'm terrible with titles)>
*thinks* Was it People are alike all over? that's the only one I can think of.

> . You meshed things nicely here.
that's reassuring.

>It has a lot of potential to become a fic series.
!
your kind remark has spurred the plot bunnies to look at where it might go next. though if you want to write in this future, please do.