Numb3rs fic: "semi-deliberate happenstance"

Oct 25, 2010 15:09

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Title: Semi-Deliberate Happenstance
Author: Keenir.
With great thanks to Pygmymuse for all the assistance, and to Mustangcandi for answering a crucial question.

Pairing/Characters: Larry Fleinhart/Nikki Betancourt, Charles Eppes; mention of Ian Edgerton, Bree Eng, Matt Li, Val Eng/Don Eppes.
Rating/Category: Mature, Gen.
Spoilers: Soft Target ( Read more... )

au: dutiful, numb3rs fanfiction, au, numb3rs

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mustangcandi October 25 2010, 23:35:24 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwww...

I have to admit: Nikki/Larry wasn't something I thought I'd understand but this was really nicely done. You really nailed Charlie and Larry's dialogue here! Stunning. (The only issue being a typo: Buckminsterfullerenes. C60... it's a chemist thing. LOL.)

I really enjoyed the last bit with Nikki and Larry and the kids. Some might have said it was the wind and the kids conspiring to bump her into him, but Larry knew Nikki was very deliberate, and this was no exception. is a great line. :)

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pygmymuse October 28 2010, 22:24:08 UTC
Meant to stop by and comment on this (but when one is without internet, one can't do stuff like that), just to say it's good to see it posted. I enjoyed the look at a Nikki/Larry relationship. Not a pairing you see much, right?

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