Dollhouseathon for Otahyoni: "Two People"

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Title: Two People

Author: Keenir

Beta-reader: Sabaceanbabe
(I added a bit after you saw it, though)Rating: PG13

Comments

[otahyoni]

Ohhhhhhhhhh! SUCH an interesting take on the end of...that one episode whose name I can't remember right now. (It's late for me, even if late for me is the-night-is-just-getting-started for everyone else.)

I love strong Priya, and how awesome she is, hauling Anthony's unconscious self all over the desert. Very cool.

Thank you so much! \o/

[staringiscaring]

This was very interesting and I like your Priya characterization. This line is especially vivid. Good job on the description.

"Priya awoke, her fingers cramped, in the shade cast by a cathedral of bone. Thousands of years ago, a mammoth had died here so they would have shelter. The ground had washed away from one end, leaving her and - she shot out one hand to feel, and touched the familiar form - Tony in ribbed light."

Thanks for participating in the dollficathon!