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[rodlox]

part of my Al Capone AU story for CHAOS_thon:

Comments

[megume_legume]

Much love for the dialogue banter, very witty and pointed. =) I really like the tone you've set up for this entire thing.

[I also had to go and google knish, it looks yummy.]

[oparu]

It's very much it's own world, which is awesome! You can definitely feel how fast and snappy the dialogue would be.