Nice little tidbits (for some reason, I like the one about Scott most... did I detect some uncomfortableness with Chloe and the fact that James is happy in her relationship?) with just the right length and depth. Very well done.
I never would have thought of shipping these two, but once you accept the pairing, each of these snippets works really well. I think I like Scott's best, the underlying bitterness.
I almost included - but then removed it - was Young's dream had Rush and James skipping hand-in-hand down the corridor, and Scott's dream had the walls being paper-thin and him unable to sleep through the noise. ;)
This is really nice - I liked getting the glimpse into the other characters' minds, and bringing their dreams into it, just makes it that much more interesting (and entertaining) to read! Love Greer's perspective - and that's the perfect note to end it on. (but they're so interesting it kinda makes me want to see you write the whole crew - lol.)
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Young and Greer are just happy things are working, but Scott is having issues. LOL!
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I almost included - but then removed it - was Young's dream had Rush and James skipping hand-in-hand down the corridor, and Scott's dream had the walls being paper-thin and him unable to sleep through the noise. ;)
if Scott was a superhero, he'd be Issues Man. :)
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Who would play the part of Dr. Horrible, from Dr. Horrible's SingALong Blog? Rush?
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