>I'd say Poor Alice but she's making herself look guilty. LOL. I think she's more insulted that David keeps saying "it'll all turn out right in the end"..(when there's no indication of *when* it will all end)
...that and, after having her life and her friendships dissected for more than a few hours, she's probably not thinking any clearer than either of us would be in her circumstances.
>I hope David goes after her... eventually. *puppy eyes* I do have hopes to make this into a trilogy - in the wake of 'Trust Metric', Colby convinces David to try again with Alice, and in the sequel to that - either David apologizes to Alice, or Colby apologizes for David and asks Alice to give David another chance.
Colby convinces David to try again with Alice, and in the sequel to that - either David apologizes to Alice, or Colby apologizes for David and asks Alice to give David another chance.
Hee! Are you saying you're thinking of writing make up fic, but you have to write the fight first? Hehehe *twirls moustache some more, laughing maniacally.*
>Are you saying you're thinking of writing make up fic, but you have to write the fight first? *nods* Strangely, it doesn't matter if its an argument or a murder - if I write the after-effects (the making up or the investigation) first, it's piecemeal and self-contradicting.
so I'm laying out the initial argument beforehand.
(though plot bunny you gave me, was mostly for the ficlet you just read...the little piece left was for the existance of making up)
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I'd say Poor Alice but she's making herself look guilty. LOL.
I hope David goes after her... eventually. *puppy eyes*
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>Ouch. Poor David.
yep; I'm trying to emotionally whump characters now.
>I'd say Poor Alice but she's making herself look guilty. LOL.
I think she's more insulted that David keeps saying "it'll all turn out right in the end"..(when there's no indication of *when* it will all end)
...that and, after having her life and her friendships dissected for more than a few hours, she's probably not thinking any clearer than either of us would be in her circumstances.
>I hope David goes after her... eventually. *puppy eyes*
I do have hopes to make this into a trilogy - in the wake of 'Trust Metric', Colby convinces David to try again with Alice, and in the sequel to that - either David apologizes to Alice, or Colby apologizes for David and asks Alice to give David another chance.
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Yes. This. All of it. :)
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>Are you saying you're thinking of writing make up fic, but you have to write the fight first?
*nods* Strangely, it doesn't matter if its an argument or a murder - if I write the after-effects (the making up or the investigation) first, it's piecemeal and self-contradicting.
so I'm laying out the initial argument beforehand.
(though plot bunny you gave me, was mostly for the ficlet you just read...the little piece left was for the existance of making up)
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