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[rocknroll_iswar]

This will be in Monday's issue of the Union at Cal State Long Beach. I'm not exactly sure how I feel about it. It yearns to be developed, but they needed a short piece - in fact they preferred a poem.

[The sound of a baby crying]

Suddenly my eyes were open, and I dearly regretted it. The white popcorn ceiling, the white walls, the white comforter,

Comments

[_____sketchbook]

now thats some good baby making!

i loved it man, i liked how it puts you in that place,
i love how it is something familiar and i loved the description you put to it. Kudos