Comments | rocket100: R49: Paper (And a sketch!)

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R49: Paper (And a sketch!)

Jan 13, 2009 20:10

i43.photobucket.com/albums/e374/Mako_Streak/MamShow.jpg <--Sketch of Pearl I'm CGing. You can see the adjustments made in photoshop.

Title: Paper
Characters: Male Rocket Admin, Giovanni, Pearl
POV: Male Admin, then Giovanni
Notes: In the first line, Miyamoto references a kusuma, which is a paper wall-screen type thing. Paper-thin is used to describe ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

willy_wiluhps January 16 2009, 06:44:59 UTC

What's paper-thin here would be the illusion (or maybe delusion) that Pearl had been "retrained". No matter what characteristics she exhibited outside, her baser instincts were too deeply-seated to be contained in the situation. Actually, quite a number of things came to an abrupt end in this fic: Emilio's life, his friendship with Miyamoto. A lot of things could be described as paper-thin!

Pretty sketch, too! I wonder where Pearl buys her bras? ;D It's interesting for me to see art in transition phases like this, to see how different artists go from one stage to another, or something like that...

lavelventine January 16 2009, 07:08:25 UTC

TWT Your comments make me jump for joy. Yes- one of the things I tried to get across is that mistake Giovanni makes in assuming that since Pearl eats with a knife and fork, she is "civilized.' As abrupt as paper tearing. My gosh, you got so much out of it- even things that fit perfectly that I never thought of! TwT <-Tears of joy

Well, it's not so much her bras as all her other clothes. XDD Imagine getting her pants on those huge hips!

XD Stages? It's 'cause I don't really have a definite style or stuff like that. A friend complained that looking through my collection, it was like I 'couldn't make up my mind.' XD I glad you like it though! ^w^

willy_wiluhps January 16 2009, 07:39:57 UTC

Oh, I just meant like, the transition from pencil to ink, not your style of art, haha! But, I think it's better not to have a definite style, because it's too much fun to experiment without labels anyway!

lavelventine January 17 2009, 05:46:29 UTC

Ohh! XDDD No, it's still a pencil! Just that I only lined it because I was CGing it. XD

Oooh, you do have a point. ^^" No point in chaining meself up.

lil_rebbitzen January 21 2009, 03:45:56 UTC

About the pic:
Holy shit, they're as big as Seren's! O_O
At least Ser covers hers, though.
Oh wait, decency happens to other people... :)

About the story:
Excellent job. I caught the illusion as well.
I love Pearl. She's the complete opposite of a character I would write, and she and Seren would try to kill each other if they ever met.
Sweet! Catfight! XD

About her eating him:
Ewwwww...I know why...but ew.

lavelventine January 27 2009, 06:53:00 UTC

Thank you.

Eeew? Morally disgusting or psychologically disgusting? Sorry, I'm a bit unclear.