Story time ^^
Ha ha, hey, everyone. It's been awhile since I've posted here, but I've been slowly becoming a fan of Commandshipping lately and have been thinking of lots of ideas for this relationship in fanfiction. This story "sort of kind of" implies it, but I might try something more direct later this week. Hope ya like ;]
“You can have him.”
It was a simple ( Read more... )
“You can have him.”
It was a simple ( Read more... )
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“Yeah, you’re basically thirty five and still single. Gee, I wonder why…”
Snap.
I clenched her arm as tight as I could.
"Snap" doesn't really tell us what's going on. We learn in the next line that it was because of the potential cakesmash, but "snap" seems like a strange thing to put as an action in and of itself.
Interesting how Domino has some double standards here. She insists on being called by her name but doesn't do the same for her opponent, and also rags on her for being 35 and single when Giovanni himself is single (at least you haven't mentioned that this is an affair anyway) and probably even older.
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blackjackrocket:
1. Domino sees the woman come to visit Giovanni, but she doesn't know her name. Perhaps I should have been clearer about this.
2. About Domino's "double-standards," I really didn't get too technical about this. My best answer would be that Domino sees this woman looking for "love" or some sort of satisfaction. Giovanni, on the other hand, seems like he would be the type of person who would choose not to lock himself into a strict relationship, such as marriage. In other words, Domino believes that even though Giovanni is a selfish creep, he could probably have the wife of his choice if he had a desire to do so.
3.As for the "snap" effect, I was thinking more along the lines of the sound effect that Domino's hand grabbing the woman's arm would make. However, I'll go back and think of something more specific in directing to what has happened.
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