Comments | rock_mafia: Get It Right [PG-13]: Warning for consensual spanking, mild D/s

rock_mafia

Get It Right [PG-13]: Warning for consensual spanking, mild D/s

Jun 18, 2011 22:57

Get It Right: Rodney's feeling guilty about something, but John just doesn't get it. Eventually he does though. Warning for mentions of character death and slightly AU. Spoilers for 3x20, 4x01. ~2200 words.

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pairing: mcshep, gift!fic, mild!d/s

Comments 8

violetcondition June 19 2011, 15:11:23 UTC

that left a bit of a bitter taste in my mouth....really disturbing to see john so slappy.

rock_mafia July 7 2011, 20:49:56 UTC

thanks for commenting.

violetcondition July 7 2011, 20:54:51 UTC

really well written as usual, only the subject matter was disturbing, and that is the point of a good piece of literature, to move the reader, so thank you for writing it :)

goddess47 June 19 2011, 23:31:55 UTC

Bringing Rodney down after letting him spin out of control is hard on both of them.... neither one of them is easy.

But Rodney should have fought John harder, too....

::pets them both gently::

rock_mafia July 7 2011, 20:49:44 UTC

Thank you for commenting. Sorry I fail at responding to said comment! <3

kimboosan July 4 2011, 02:11:51 UTC

I actually read this earlier this week, but UGH I just read-and-ran as I tried to survive the onslaught of work etc. This was such a nice reprieve, though, and I wanted to make sure I came back and commented on it.

I *love* this. You've got an instinctive feel for the power dynamics of a D/s relationship, and I adore how you didn't idealize it. John screws up by not paying attention, Rodney is a brat, but in the end it is a loving power exchange that says SO much about their relationship. And, honestly, I've always seen Rodney as a smart-ass-submissive who needs subspace just to unwind. You portrayed that head!canon of mine perfectly! ♥

rock_mafia July 7 2011, 20:50:59 UTC

HAHA! Thank you so much for commenting. I am a huge, huge, huge fan of the whole BDSM lifestyle (as in reading, not practicing) but I've never tried to write it and I WAS SO AFRAID I WAS GOING TO GET EVERYTHING WRONG, even though it was just a small glimpse into that lifestyle.

But yes! Thank you for commenting! I always adore your comments.

kimboosan July 11 2011, 20:58:58 UTC

No, you got it right on. I admit, the "perfect Dom" phenomenon is one reason I got tired of Xanthe's stories, and won't even read KieraMarcos' BDSM SGA epic; it's no different than any other relationship, with misunderstandings and mistakes and trust issues. You captured that without making it a dramatic problem, and that is something that is far too rare in BDSM fic overall. <3