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rock_mafia

Untitled: McShep H/C [G]

Jun 18, 2011 15:28

Untitled: John gets hurt in an explosion. Rodney just wants to make sure he's okay. Written for themcshep_love back!fill. ~800 words.
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rating: g, pairing: mcshep genre: hurt/comfort, genre: established relationship

Comments 9

melagan June 18 2011, 21:00:58 UTC

*loves all over your story*

rock_mafia June 18 2011, 21:04:08 UTC

Thank you darlin :)

adafrog June 18 2011, 21:56:37 UTC

Loved this, thanks!

rock_mafia June 19 2011, 02:58:23 UTC

Thank you!

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rock_mafia June 19 2011, 02:58:35 UTC

Thank you very much! BTW: I love your icon!

violetcondition June 19 2011, 15:03:55 UTC

sexy back :)

kimboosan June 19 2011, 22:44:57 UTC

I've never been too much of a h/c fan because people go all over the top with it. I liked your more subtle approach, from John's POV and his muted, pain-addled sensations. On that note, I also like how you did not make a mockery of recovery; it not only takes a while, it's painful and exhausting and too often fics just kind of brush over that in their rush to get to the "comfort" part. I really love how you write these two together. <3

rock_mafia June 19 2011, 22:48:34 UTC

Haha! I definitely get what you mean about the over the top thing, because that's generally how I roll when it comes to my h/c! What can I say? John hurts so nicely :D

That being said, I appreciate you taking the time to comment! I did try to keep this one slow and steady, which wasn't easy given the shortness of the piece, but truthfully, it's probably one of my favorites! So yes :D Thank you!