for Brady!

Oct 06, 2010 09:33


Title: Morning
Characters/Pairing:  Steve/Diana
Rating: PG
Word Count: 455
Disclaimer: DC owns.
Warning: character death
AN: for bradygirl_12 ’s birthday!  Hope it was great! =)  Btw, I think the angst got a little, well, you'll see...

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steve/diana, b-day

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bradygirl_12 October 6 2010, 17:36:31 UTC
*sobs*

You wrote this so heartbreakingly beautiful, Catwoman! *sniffs*

I love the description of Steve through Diana's eyes, and her struggle to get through each new morning now. And it's no surprise that she thought she'd go first.

The angst was SO well-done! Thank you so much for this! *hugs*

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rocaw October 7 2010, 16:11:23 UTC
*hugs*

Aww, thank you, Brady! =D

You were right, Steve an d Diana work so well with angst, too! I was a little surprised because they are one of the few couples I always picture blissfully happy!

Yay, I'm so glad you liked this! XD

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darthbatgirl October 6 2010, 19:59:20 UTC
Oh so sad. I think you did a wonderful job of showing Diana's sorrow.

Well done.

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rocaw October 7 2010, 16:13:34 UTC
I felt a little bad making Diana so sad...

Thank you! =D

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rocaw October 7 2010, 16:15:15 UTC
Thank you! I was afraid it was too angsty, but I'm glad you think the happy bits stood out as well! =D

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saavikam77 October 7 2010, 00:15:48 UTC
*cries* ~O_O~

My gods, this was heartbreaking and gorgeous and just perfect!

*wipes tears*

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rocaw October 7 2010, 16:16:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so! =)

*hands tissue*

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crooked_halo October 7 2010, 04:03:12 UTC
This broke my heart. So well-written! Poor Diana :(

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rocaw October 7 2010, 16:17:21 UTC
Thank you! =) But poor Diana, indeed. =(

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