I think you did a wonderful job portraying their ever-so-complicated selves here, with their need-each-other and love-each-other and both of them still so unsure of each other's feelings.
I thought I replied to your comment before (is it just me or or is lj acting up lately?). But I'm glad you enjoyed this ending better (it only took me a year to continue! *headdesk* I know, I'll get better!)
Eee! Wonderful! You captured the many levels of messed up that is their ..."relationship", for lack of a word that cohesively describes their "i love you/i hate you/i can't live without you/you're the most annoying person ever/why do you lie all the time/just leave me to my delusions" thing they have going on.
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i love you/i hate you/i can't live without you/you're the most annoying person ever/why do you lie all the time/just leave me to my delusions
Yup, that sounds just about right! ;)
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