FIC: "Drive" (9/?) - Iron Man (movieverse), Tony/Pepper, R

Jul 01, 2011 13:05

 "Drive"

Written for the Valentine's challenge at its_always_been . See master page for prompts, author's notes, and previous/subsequent chapters.

Bonus author's notes:  I have the flu and it is affecting my ability to judge whether this is terrible or not. So hopefully it's not.

9. On My Bed )

smut!, prompts, drive, oh snap!, iron man, tony/pepper, fic

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invicta_affect July 21 2011, 06:05:55 UTC
So I've been reading a lot of Iron Man fic recently, and this story is one of the best so far. I absolutely love your attention to detail. Like in the first chapter - Pepper's large sunglasses, Tony's arc reactor glinting in the hot sun. You had me hooked after about one paragraph.

And the sex? Amaaaazing. You have this knack where you don't make it too graphic but then you'll have a line and the whole thing feels like it's about to spontaneously combust.

And the line about Tony seeing his dead parents after not enough sleep? Felt like a punch in the guts. But in a kinda cathartic-ly good way.

I love every snide mark, every quirk of the lips, every steamy moment. Can't wait for more :D

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roboticonograph July 21 2011, 06:40:08 UTC
Thanks. I'm super proud of this story so far, and I'm glad to hear people are enjoying it.

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