FIC: "Drive" (5/?) - Iron Man (movieverse), Tony/Pepper, R

Apr 05, 2011 17:30

 "Drive"

Written for the Valentine's challenge at Read more... )

smut!, drive, iron man, tony/pepper, fic

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roboticonograph April 5 2011, 05:28:15 UTC
Just FYI, y'all, I have been trying to post the next chapter of Drive for the past HOUR and LJ won't make it happen for me. And I have shit to do tomorrow, so I'm going to bed. Sorry.

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serenitysea April 5 2011, 17:05:53 UTC
LJ IS BEING STUPID. I've been trying to post for an hour and a half and it just won't work. i can't edit an entry, either!! blergh.

looking forward to reading Drive when it arrives. :)

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roboticonograph April 5 2011, 22:14:00 UTC
It has arrived!

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serenitysea April 6 2011, 17:29:28 UTC
Sooooooooo fantastic. Deliciously hot and so true to them. I especially liked the idea of the "executive retreat" -- just a quiet little snapshot into their lives that makes so much sense and really gives insight into the non-romantic parts of their lives, too. Loved this update, and that Pepper could think on her feet so fast while Tony was still in a bit of shock, haha.

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luckytohaveher April 5 2011, 19:54:11 UTC
THIS IS IT, ROBOT. WE'RE GETTING THE HELL OUTTA DODGE.

I WILL NOT BE DEPRIVED OF THE FINAL DRAFTS OF YOUR PORN!

We'll start our own Livejournal clone. DuckyJournal.

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roboticonograph April 5 2011, 22:14:28 UTC
FIXED!

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luckytohaveher April 5 2011, 22:25:41 UTC
You just *had* to wait until I was in class.

You're evil. *points to icon* This is a machiavellian scheme worthy of Obadiah.

Anyway. pimp it, my child. The world needs it.

Will review when I'm done talking about dead people.

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roboticonograph April 7 2011, 01:28:40 UTC
Y NO REVIEW???? I AM DISAPPOINT

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roboticonograph April 7 2011, 01:30:39 UTC
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! Stay tuned!

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neptunesubmerge April 7 2011, 01:25:23 UTC
You know I like to go on forever and a day in my reviews, but today I cannot because my brain has been fried. Between the hotness of the sex and the sweetness of the kissing going on and on and on, I can't really think about anything else.

I am curious as to how long they have had this executive retreat tradition. Did it come into being after Pepper became CEO, or have they always had it?

I also love how their sex in a public space was oral had consequences. They got caught. Pepper had some beautiful thinking on her feet. Her ability to adapt so fast to that both proves how great a fit she is for Tony while also giving her a really good reason to take a few steps back. She doesn't want to be seen leaving his home, but she almost got caught in a much worse position.

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roboticonograph April 7 2011, 01:38:43 UTC
In my mind, the executive retreat started after Pepper became CEO. I see it as symbolic of the power shift in their relationship--I don't know whether Pepper would have gone out drinking with Tony when he was her boss. (Another time I will tell you the hilarious story of the one time I got drunk with my supervisor, which culminated in my now-oft-quoted remark, "You're not the boss of THE BAR!")

And yes, consequences. They are inevitable and forthcoming!

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neptunesubmerge April 7 2011, 02:46:19 UTC
I was curious because it seemed so comforting and familiar to Tony. It makes me wonder how many times they have been able to carry out a weekly retreat. Pepper had the job of CEO for one week as of Iron Man 2. How much time has passed since then?

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roboticonograph April 9 2011, 18:25:46 UTC
I figure it's been a couple of months since then--time enough for them to start getting settled in their new jobs and new routines.

I love how I say "I figure," like I'm not writing the story.

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dracutgrl April 7 2011, 01:33:08 UTC
Ahhhh. So worth waiting for BUT I DON'T WANT TO HAVE TO WAIT!!!!

Sex in public bathrooms squicks me, but this was so hot and well-written I was able to read without shaking. BRAVA!!

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roboticonograph April 7 2011, 01:43:40 UTC
Yeah, it's not something I would enjoy either! This originally was going to be just them talking over drinks but then the characters decided to take it in a different direction. And who am I to argue? Just the writer. :P

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dracutgrl April 7 2011, 01:46:44 UTC
They can be little horndogs, can't they ;)

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