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ladyarcherfan3 in robinsociety

The Fury of the Storm

Jan 29, 2010 15:37

Title: The Fury of the Storm
Author: ladyarcherfan3
Word Count: 4,566
Rating: PG
Characters: Robin, Marian, the gang
Genre: General, romance
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: I do not own or claim Robin Hood, just my imagination
Summary: Robin and Marian get caught in a winter storm; Robin is injured and the couple have a conversation to clear up a few issues ( Read more... )

char: will, char: djaq, rating: pg, char: marian, pairing: robin/marian, fic, char: little john, char: robin, intercomm, contributor: ladyarcherfan3, length: short fic, char: allan

Comments 7

amarra_jade January 29 2010, 22:28:18 UTC

“You’re right. The spending the night in a cave part would be more comfortable if there were no injuries involved. . .” Robin said, his roguish grin audible in his voice.

“Just so you know,” Marian said dryly, “it is your head injury that is preventing me from giving you a well deserved slap.”

Haha! I can totally see an exchange like this taking place on the show. This is adorable, and your characterizations are spot on. :D

ladyarcherfan3 January 31 2010, 01:10:05 UTC

Thank you very much! It always makes my day when I get told I nailed the characters. ;D

railise February 8 2010, 20:39:41 UTC

Oh, this is so very sweet!! You're a fantastic writer, and there were a couple of lines that grabbed me as being particularly excellent:

the forest became a servant to the storm’s terror

The sound of the wind faded to a frustrated whine as it could not reach into the cave

I really, really loved those. Also, Much's voice in the beginning was so dead on that I could hear Sam Troughton saying those lines, and I laughed more than I probably should've at this:

“I’m sure you’ll be able to persuade it to leave”

:D

Great job!!!

ladyarcherfan3 February 9 2010, 15:59:29 UTC

*blushes* Thank you! I got snowed in while writing this story, and spent the day writing and listening to the wind howling, so that really helped the muse come up with images.

omteddy2006 February 25 2010, 03:41:45 UTC

I think you're "muse-icle" did you a great service as your descriptions of the storm were wonderful.

Other than Robin and Marian's combined lack of judgment about the storm, I liked it very much. They both should have known better. Sometimes, I swear they can't think when the other is around.

ladyarcherfan3 April 1 2010, 00:47:55 UTC

Sometimes, I swear they can't think when the other is around.
Heh, that does seem to happen a lot. They do seem to bring out the best and the worst in each other, given the situation.

lotusflower85 January 7 2011, 13:52:49 UTC

This was lovely - especially the description of the storm. It was nice for Robin and Marian to be honest with one another for a change.