Part Three: Attempts

Sep 24, 2006 18:47

Brian is bent over the soundboard, listening intently to the music. He frowns, chewing thoughtfully on his lower lip. "I don't know," he says. "I'm sorry, I think it sounds flat. What if we - what?"

AJ's eyes are narrowed, his expression calculating.

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mysoulunfolding September 24 2006, 19:20:12 UTC
"Sly bastard," Nick says with a small smirk.

AJ is a sly bastard, and I love him for it. And the whole Nick shaving his chest bit was hilarous! :-)

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bubbleforest September 25 2006, 07:39:59 UTC
He really is enjoying his part of the bet way too much. *LOL* And thank you! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

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turlough September 24 2006, 20:19:40 UTC
Wheeeeee, a new chapter!!!

AJ's really working it, I wonder how long Brian will last :-)

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bubbleforest September 25 2006, 07:41:32 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you're excited to see more of this! :D Thank you tons for commenting. ♥

Mwah! I wonder as well. I guess we'll all have to see what will happen. (It's weird having no clue how your own story will turn out. *LOL*)

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turlough September 25 2006, 10:04:44 UTC
This time it looks like you get to chose 'cause the opinions of your readers are very divided :-)

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bubbleforest September 25 2006, 10:08:06 UTC
Wah, I know! I've been fretting a little over it, too. *LOL* I'm hoping a couple more people will come vote, 'cause I really don't want to have to decide on my own.

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trumpeterofdoom September 25 2006, 14:38:09 UTC
I don't shave my chest hair, goddammit - all right, feel it for yourself then - Howie, Howie, man, why are you running? Howie!

AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Dude, seriously, you have to do this more often, because I had to go back and read and refresh my memory. And everything's been so funny so far, and just. MORE AJ.

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bubbleforest September 25 2006, 15:06:55 UTC
You know what, that is so cool to hear. Because I'm not exactly known for my humor skills when it comes to fic, so it's really cool that people actually, like, find this even remotely amusing. Really, really cool, so thank you for saying that. :)

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epicflailer October 3 2006, 04:38:36 UTC
dude, i'm hardly on el-jay anymore, and i always make it a point to check this out when i come on. so imagine my glee at AN UPATE!

*confettis the boys*

*confettis you*

characterization = perfect. plot = hilarious. i have no words for how much i love this. *twirls you!*

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bubbleforest October 4 2006, 09:30:48 UTC
NAT! Dude, you really are the best ever. I wish you'd come on LJ more often. :/

I'm so glad you still like it! You're so awesome for always leaving feedback. Thank you! (Also, you should sign up for this. I'm just sayin'. :)

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epicflailer October 4 2006, 09:34:41 UTC
heh. i'll try, but no guarantees! once school starts again (in two weeks) i'll be on msn all the time though. so yes. *g*

dude, *still*? what is this "still"? as if i could NOT like anything written by you. pffft. <3

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fadedsouls October 14 2006, 12:26:55 UTC
So I finally got my ass over here and what do I find? Pretty happy slashable Boys!!! You just made my inner slashy very happy!! *nods*

Can't wait to read more of this!! I am in love with AJ right now! And Brian, because, well, he's Brian. And also, poor Howie, scarred for life ;)

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