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[jjonaes]

Title: applesauce
Author:Me
Pairing: Joick
rating: nc-17
A/N:TOOK ME FORFUCKINGEVER to write this! But I'm done! And I'm quite happy with it. Sorry for any mistakes I didn't have the patience to proof read it.

Comments

[perrysburggirl]

I loved it but I agree with everyone... What did he say???

[jjonaes]

ha. Thks i'm glad you liked it. But I have absolutly no idea what the boy said. Maybe we'll find out.. 0.o

[rosettirose]

This was so hot! I swear I need one of them cold showers myself. :D
I loved the end too. the finger nipping was too effing cute :DDDD
This needs a SEQUEL!<3

[jjonaes]

lol thank you!

[quartetship]

AGH! I all kinds of adored this! So delicious...

And (if I understood the situation correctly...) I LOVE that they have a "warning word"... and I love the way you wrote it into the story. Such a real, honest thing, yet so awesome in the storyline... I'm probably more impressed with this than with anything else I've read lately, just because of that. *is odd*

And hahahahaha Joe! I totally knew he wasn't gonna take it back...

Wonderful job, lovie! <33

[jjonaes]

awe yay! Thanks lol. You understood correctly 'applesauce' was indeed the warning word. ^_^
I'm glad I impressed you!

[immaculate_beam]

Sweet mother of God.

*has collapsed on the floor*

Ooooohhh, you are too wonderful! I agree with the person who said your stories may lead to death.

Headline: FANFICTION CAUSES SPONTANEOUS HUMAN COMBUSTION!

[jjonaes]

haha! I'll have to start putting that disclaimer on my stories.

awe *was not twirled* =[

[immaculate_beam]

That you will.

Oh, fine. *twirls* :D

[sweetliar64]

Fantastic! Hot! I wasn't expecting the turnaround so that was a nice surprise too.

[jjonaes]

lol it's always fun turning it around a bit. ^_^ Eventhough I love Dom!Nick