Even more story

[roberts_muse]

You know, I really need a title for this thing. Well, anyway--I just got my copy of "Never Enough" and started reading it and got inspired to do a bit more. So, hope you all enjoy! The usual disclaimers still apply...this is fiction, never happened, do not read if M/M offends you, blah blah blah...

Comments

[distantnoises]

Okay, finally taken to reading again (yay!), and here this was waiting for me. All caught up now and... Wow! This is just wonderful. Heart wrenching to say the least. A beautiful piece and I am so looking forward to more of it.

And I am so sorry to hear about your doggie! I do not deal well with losing pets, not at all.

[hansah]

This is a very intersting and so uncommon fiction! I really don't know where you're leading us and that's wonderful! It's a new way to depict our guys.
Poor Robert, old, feeling lost, being saved by Simon... He seems so fragile that he could cling himself to anything, to anyone... is that love?
And does Simon loves him back or really feel desire for him? You leave us with doubts and a huge curiosity for what coming next. I can't wait for it! I adore this fic!

[fuji_fujiwara]

But this is incredibly good! It's so true, so perceptive, and so original. Very few people dare write about the present and you're doing it and making it so real. These might be Robert's real feelings now that he's ageing. And Simon, the one who was always able to express himself more through his body than with words, helps Robert and shows his affection the only way he knows, with sex and physical contact. I wish it was all true, I wish it couldn't be a story... Please, don't stop writing!

[hierokeryx]

this is very, very good. loved this chapter.

[anonymous]

Great job, really!
Please... continue the story writing something about yesterday's night, after the London's concert at the Royal Albert Hall...
Thanks again for your pleasant story!
B.