Hey nice spell check catch, thanks! I meant "Listen here:".... Apparently my audio player coding isn't cross posting from my website, http://www.robertlyon.org . This post is the top entry and if you scroll to the bottom you'll be able to hear an audio post that's about ten minutes long, including a reading of this letter. I'm trying to post more, everything just take me so damn long. Just setting up this post after I had all content complete took me three hours!!!
no, thank youennuidolorAugust 24 2014, 08:44:22 UTC
Ok so I finally listened to it, and it sounds even more poetic coming from you than it did when I read it to myself.
Nit picking on my behalf: edit the recording or re-record it so that it's just you introducing the piece and then reading it. It's good material. The introduction about different types of microphones is a bit long.
Just my opinion, take it for what it is worth and I hope you are feeling encouraged by the quality of your work!
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Are you going to condense it later or something?
I was drawn to this one and had to kind of mouth-read it to feel like I was understanding it on an emotional level but again it seemed really great!
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Nit picking on my behalf: edit the recording or re-record it so that it's just you introducing the piece and then reading it. It's good material. The introduction about different types of microphones is a bit long.
Just my opinion, take it for what it is worth and I hope you are feeling encouraged by the quality of your work!
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Yea I hear you. On a prior post I had just did the poem. I've got to do another reading. I wanna get the bugs outside as background before the cold!!!
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