Fic: Keane & Torres - Promises of Things to Come 3: The Derby

[robbie96]

Title: Promises of Things to Come 3: The Derby

Characters: Fernando Torres, Robbie Keane, Pepe Reina, Dirk Kuyt, Xabi Alonso, Stevie Gerrard, Jamie Carragher, Alvaro Arbeloa, Javier Mascherano and Albert Riera

Disclaimer: Pure fiction, any similarities to actual events or people living or dead is purely a coincidence.

Rating:  R, maybe NC 17?

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Comments

[ombu_tree]

hey`
I liked the on-pitch orgasmic hug ^_^ I think it must be the first time I've read a fic that made something go all the way out in public, in front of the fans. brave move =)

I also liked how Robbie was in such a dilemma, and how Nando is so protected by his Spanish compatriots (I totally see them like this too) His face just screams, "protect me"

mmm, I feel for both strikers... but at least for now, I don't think this pairing is really working for me yet. But that doesn't take away anything from how you wrote it, I just don't (or refuses to) see Fernando being with Robbie. I still think it's because in my mind, Robbie is just too straight.

but hey, if anyone can change my mind... you can ^_^ keep writing, a few more fics and who knows? =P

[robbie96]

Ya, I think I just enjoy torturing Keano....and writing a love sick Nando.....this is only my third fic so....I'm just trying out some pairings....lol...Thanks for reading....I'm off to read some of your older fics. Cheers ;D

[sophie_lfc]

sorry that i write this late.
i've read this story a dozen times but i never left a comment, lo siento. :(
but now.
IT IS AAAAWEEEESOOOOMEEEE! :D
please, pleeeaaase write more! :*
(of course only if you can. :o)

[robbie96]

No worries...Glad you liked it ...

Haven't thought about this fic in ages ....

I'm planning on writing more soon .... just got to get started again!

Thanks for commenting :)

[sophie_lfc]

yeeeah! :D
you're very welcome. :]