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auntlynnie September 1 2011, 18:13:27 UTC
I loved the duel... interesting chat amongst the menfolk while she was unconscious...

(and I tried to find part 1 to rered it, but couldn't.)

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auntlynnie September 1 2011, 18:18:14 UTC
(I found the other chapter. The tags don't match, which is why I couldn't find it. This is tagged "hp fics", but chapter 1 is tagged "hp fic".)

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roadkill2580 September 2 2011, 06:15:57 UTC
Urgh, I'm so sorry about the tags issue! I've just spent some time editing my tags, so hopefully this problem won't happen again. Let me know if you spot any more inconsistencies.

Glad you enjoyed this chapter. The next chapter might be awhile in coming, since I have to do hermione_smut. Oh, how the time flies!

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vamp1987 September 1 2011, 21:43:22 UTC
So the duel was to determine whether or not they married or was it a marriage in its own right? Very interesting. Hermione is going to be pissed when she wakes up and is not only not in her home but supposedly has a new husband.

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roadkill2580 September 2 2011, 06:16:59 UTC
Your guess is really close. Really, you might as well be correct for how close your guess is. And yes, Hermione will be pissed when she wakes up. Thanks for commenting!

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narcissa_malfoy September 2 2011, 17:12:48 UTC
Somehow I must have missed this story the first time around! Imagine my excitement to have two chapters to read at once :)

Have I mentioned that marriage law/arranged marriages/anything of the sort fics hits my kink buttons so hard? This is like candy to me. Delicious candy.

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roadkill2580 September 4 2011, 19:53:06 UTC
Why does it take me so long to get back to people? Ugh.

Isn't that soooo exciting when you see multiple chapters up at once? I always grin like an idiot. Glad I (accidentally) made your day!

I heart anything half way related to the marriage law so hard. Unfortunately, its hard to find decent ones *pouts*.

Thank you for commenting!!

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svelterose May 1 2012, 02:16:28 UTC
This has got to be my favorite chapter. I'm a huge action-adventure gal and this duel shows perfectly how adept at dueling Hermione is. Let's be real - Rabastan is older, more experienced in fighting fast and hard. Hermione certainly held her own but ultimately, he had the upper hand.

I love Hermione as a strong woman but I love reading how she comes out after falling down hard. Can't wait to see what else you've got in store! Don't make us wait too long. :D

(Now the sequence is all screwed up lol, I reviewed from current to past.)

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roadkill2580 May 1 2012, 02:50:15 UTC
OMG YOU'RE ALIVE!!!

*snuggles*

How are you?! Where have you been? I thought you died!...Well, not really, but you know what I mean.

I hated this chapter so hard. I feel like I suck at writing action/fighting scenes. They're hard for me to describe accurately. So its pretty nice to hear you enjoyed it!

I love reading an amazing duelist Hermione, but you're right, Rabastan would have the upper hand. Plus, canonically, Hermione tends to solve her problems in more underhanded, from a distance kind of way.

Not sure when the next update will be, since my porninthesun is due in like, two and half weeks. But I hope to update at least twice this summer.

If you get bored, you should browse through my masterlist. I've added a few things since the last time you've been through. (Yes, I am totally pimping myself.)

Off to read the rest of your comments!

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