Fic: Alive, Rory/Eleven (Doctor Who) Rated R

[rl4sb4eva]

Title: Alive
Pairing: Rory/Eleven (Pre-slash really)
Rating: R to be on the safe side.
Warnings: Discipline (with a belt)
Spoilers: Up to Episode 13: The Big Bang
Disclaimer: As much as I would love to own it I don’t. It belongs to BBC and other assorted companies.
Author’s notes: I didn’t write this. It never happened. This may actually be the tamest

Comments

[atalantapendrag]

Oh, this is TASTY!

[rl4sb4eva]

Thank you.
x

[alt_universe_me]

Okay, I'll admit I was a bit worried about Rory disciplining the Doctor. I was worried it was going to be contrived and awkward and out of character, but this was really awesome. I could totally picture the characters in this scenario, and the build up was fantastic. How did you get in the doctor's head like that with all the memory stuff and how he doesn't feel quite alive? This is going straight to my memories. Loved it.

[rl4sb4eva]

Thank you, wow. I don't know really, I didn't get how he went from not existing to re-existing without any problems. I don't see how Amy could have remembered everything he ever did, even if he'd told her, so there must be things he remembers that never happened. That's just me however.
Thank you again, and wow on the memories.
x

[looking4tarzan]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY FIC FROM YOUUUUUUUUUU!
and it's eleven/rory kink (you do know it's not my birthday yet right?)

Can I have some more?
(I know where you live and can and will drive to yours and bug you to write more).

You know with Rory getting invested and more confident and eeeeeeee *bounces* this was awesome.

[rl4sb4eva]

I know it's not your birthday yet... You can maybe have some more. I don't know, I might have to write something completely different. About the only think I could think would be to turn it around. Have Rory needing it from the Doctor. But I get the problem it could be too samey.

I'm not going to say no-more because that way leads trouble, I said no more in the High School Musical fandom and that didn't end well. Whereas Robin Hood and Primeval I wanted to write more and couldn't. I hate my brain sometime.

Love you x x x

[looking4tarzan]

YAY!

Hmmm you could expand a little I think, and possibly even get the girls finding out. depends if you want to expand or stick to something like PWP.

Heh no your brain is kinda awesome sometimes too!

OH MY GODS HAVE YOU SEEN THE GLASTONBURY THING *Brain fwoom*

[rl4sb4eva]

I just worry it would get stagnant quickly. I was tempted to have the girls listen in at the door. But I don't know if that'll work. I could try something.

My brain is kinda awesome, sometimes. This bloody thing kept me up till 4 in the morning!

And yes I have seen the Glastonbury thing, it was awaiting me on my facebook list this morning. It's pretty awesome.

Given my over abundance of time at the moment, something else may come up at 2 in the morning again. I really need a doctor icon!

[jamarish]

I loved this, I thought that Rory spanking would be weird, but you managed to make it believable and sexy. The world needs more Rory/Eleven, they're both extremely cute together :)

[rl4sb4eva]

Thank you. A few people seem to find the idea of Rory being the disciplinarian weird, which I completely understand. And I'm glad you found it believable.
They are adorable together... Both in and out of character.
Thank you once again.
x

[rl4sb4eva]

Go right ahead. I can't write Amy/Anyone fic, because my name is Amy and my brain goes a bit wibbly.
Just drop me a link when you're done, I'd love to read it.

[rl4sb4eva]

It's not non-con in the truest sense. Maybe Dub-con at a push, and that's far from squicky. I'd say use it, I like my porn dark and squicky personally. But if you're worried pop in a warning for dub-con if you squint... And Amy's said 'No' as well, so it's less non-con than if she said 'yes'.
As for Dalek/Vampire tentacle porn... Well that's a nice image.