Comments | rl4sb4eva: Fic: Fumble a Try, Connor/Becker/Ryan, NC-17

rl4sb4eva

Fic: Fumble a Try, Connor/Becker/Ryan, NC-17

Jun 24, 2009 16:28

Title: Fumble a Try

Pairing: Connor/Becker/Ryan

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Somnophilia, slight D/s, Bondage

Author’s notes: Written before I had to leave for work, un-beta’ed. Kinda sequel to Between a Rock and a Hard Place

( Fumble a Try )

bondage, nc-17, primeval, connor/becker/ryan

Comments 19

fififolle June 24 2009, 16:57:26 UTC

efekffkpfpawsjfdfgjoagjioafjawokpobbejebusomfghothothothot

*thud*

rl4sb4eva June 25 2009, 01:46:37 UTC

Um... nice... *helps up, offers palm frond and iced water*
I'll take that as a good thing. Also kinda love that keyboard mash has the word paws in it... Sorely tempted to attempt furry fic now, which is never good.
Anyhoos, thank you for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed, I do hope your keyboard is ok though.
Rl

fififolle June 25 2009, 07:19:01 UTC

LOL!!! I spotted the paws after, and it amused me no end ;) I now see oaf, too. I think the other words were intentional :P though fek is good :) very Irish. this could turn into Countdown!
Any fic your write is bound to be good, I look forward to more! even furry fic

lukadreaming June 24 2009, 18:03:04 UTC

Guh! *Expires at the hotness of it all but revives briefly to ask nicely for Ryan's revenge*

rl4sb4eva June 25 2009, 01:48:04 UTC

Nice icon!
*offers palm frond and defibrilator paddles*
As for Ryan's revenge I don't know, a few people have asked and I won't promise anything, but I did spend the last few hours of my shift today trying to figure out what I could do...
Thank you for commenting.
Rl

fredbassett June 24 2009, 18:09:09 UTC

*FLAILS*

The Doggy is Ded!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was fucking hot!

Thanks:)

rl4sb4eva June 25 2009, 01:49:01 UTC

Oh noes! The doggy can't be dead!
I aim for hot, and 'fucking hot' is always a nice bonus.
And no no thank you for reading, a writer is nothing without an audience...
Rl

deinonychus_1 June 24 2009, 20:10:17 UTC

guh! OMFG that was hot.

rl4sb4eva June 25 2009, 01:49:52 UTC

Thank you.
Guh is a good response in my books!
Rl

knitekat June 24 2009, 20:10:48 UTC

Guh.. thud.. kitty is ex-kitty.

Do we get Ryan's revenge?

rl4sb4eva June 25 2009, 01:56:34 UTC

Damn, I've got a doggy and a kitty down... *calls a vet*
We may get Ryan's revenge, I promise nothing... Although, I have tied Connor up a lot in fic, so maybe I should get Ryan to tie Becker up and play with Connor in front of him, not letting him touch or move... Hmm, that could work.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Rl