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Feb 18, 2008 21:14


Title: Hold Me When I’m Here, Right Me When I’m Wrong...

Pairing: Stephen/Connor

Rating: NC-17

Warning: Spanking, D/s, the usual really...

Spoilers: Season 1 Episode 5

Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be, and don’t think they will anyway. The title is from When I’m Gone by 3 Doors Down, also not mine

Feedback: Very much appreciated. What am I ( Read more... )

nc-17, primeval, stephen/connor, fic

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telperion_15 February 18 2008, 21:45:02 UTC
Well, since I appear to have totally failed to comment on the last two things you've written for this series, I'd better make up for it now! *headdesk*

I really like how Connor seems to be searching for some kind of redemption, and that Stephen, although willing to try and give it to, still retains that element of concern that he might be making things worse.

There, wasn't that a sensible comment? Now for the less sensible part...

HOT HOT HOT!!! *g*

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rl4sb4eva February 18 2008, 22:05:26 UTC
Sensible response: I hadn't actually written it with that in mind to be honest, I just kinda write what I think works with the characters I have to play with. It just seemed Stephen-esque for him to ask if everything was ok.
Non-sensible response: thank you thank you thank you! I did think it was kinda hot.
As for the non-commenting, don't worry about it, I'm actually really guilty of reading things and then not commenting.
I think all in fandom are!
Once again thank you very much for reading, and glad it was hot.
Rl
x x x

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deinonychus_1 February 18 2008, 22:14:00 UTC
Guh... wibble.

That was less coherent than usual, but pretty much all I'm capable of after that fic. I do hope you do more in this series and organise them in order. They do work okay as standalones, but the overall effect of seeing the relationship development over a series of fics can be far more satisfying in many ways.

bdsm is a genre that can be hard to get right, but when it *is* done well, which your fics always are, then the results can be amazing, and hot. Thanks for another good fic.

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rl4sb4eva February 18 2008, 22:45:07 UTC
Incoherence is good! I already have the intervening parts started and they should be mostly finished in a week or two, now my muse has come back from vacation!
Thank you very much, and considering you claimed incoherence you managed an extremely coherent response...
Once again thank you for reading, and I am very glad you enjoyed it.
Rl
x x x

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fredbassett February 18 2008, 22:34:42 UTC
Another good installment. Glad you decided to post this one now.

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rl4sb4eva February 18 2008, 22:45:50 UTC
Thank you for reading.
Glad you liked it.
Rl
x x x

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byrons_brain February 20 2008, 19:48:33 UTC
OMG that's so HOT!

::rushes for cold shower::

I just love this series... looking forward to more.

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rl4sb4eva February 21 2008, 17:30:49 UTC
Hope the cold shower helped!
Glad you liked it, there should be more soon, I have the intervening pieces started and on their ways.
Thank you for reading.
Rl
x x x

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fififolle October 5 2008, 23:01:09 UTC
Oh, yay for tags! And I should be going to bed but how can I when there is more Stephen/Connor fic here? *g*
This was utterly mind-blowing. Thank you.

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rl4sb4eva October 5 2008, 23:03:17 UTC
Ah bed and sleep, I remember those...
No no, thank you for reading.
I do love tags, they make everything so easy.

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