Comments | rkowhore79: My first slash fic ever!!

rkowhore79

My first slash fic ever!!

Mar 22, 2008 21:05

I recently tried my hand at writing my first Centon fic. I don't know if it's any good or not..so please let me know!! I'd love some feedback on this one!! Negative or positive. But if it IS negative...PLEASE be gentle! I'm a slash writing virgin!!

Author: Rkowhore79
Title: The Champ ALWAYS Cums First
Pairing: Orton/Cena
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Plot ( Read more... )

fic:centon, slash

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rkowhore79 March 24 2008, 01:30:54 UTC

thank you!! i wasn't sure if it was any good or not LOL I'll work on the next part sometime this week probably. I already have in my head what I want to write, I just have to get it all out. Should I post it in a community, or no?

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rkowhore79 March 24 2008, 12:42:51 UTC

yeah, ok. i'm going to do that. thank you! i hope everybody over there likes it!!

mizzmurderx March 26 2008, 19:18:31 UTC

Ah, I love it!
Randy controlling John is just too hot.

rkowhore79 March 26 2008, 19:56:51 UTC

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it and were actually able to read it!! LOL Randy doing ANYTHING is just too hot!! LOL

kaotic_princez July 4 2008, 03:21:06 UTC

OMG! That was hott as hell! This was written really well for it to be your first slash. Going to read part two now lol

rkowhore79 July 4 2008, 13:00:20 UTC

yay! thank you!!! i wasn't even paying attention to making paragraphs or anything like that, so it was a tad confusing for some lol but i got the hang of it!! i haven't been in school for over 10 years!!

kaotic_princez July 5 2008, 01:43:22 UTC

You are so very welcome :-)

616poisongirl December 1 2008, 01:04:47 UTC

OMG, thats your first fic??! Its amazing.....I love how you write Randy, its so hot!
Cabt wait to read more!! :D

rkowhore79 December 1 2008, 13:03:14 UTC

yep, that was my first one. i remember i just kinda banged it out (no pun intended) lol in like one day. i had never ever written anything like that before! i'm glad ya liked it.

616poisongirl December 1 2008, 13:24:40 UTC

I loved it:D
I loved them all....I was still up at about 4am reading, I still have the last one to read...I was just too tired :D

rkowhore79 December 1 2008, 13:42:46 UTC

wow!! that's dedication. lol
ehhhh, the last one was kinda fluffy. not my usual at all. i gave it a try, though. but it's not really my thing.

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rkowhore79 March 29 2009, 15:40:27 UTC

thank you! i just read this one for the first time in agesssss after you left your comment and i was like facepalming myself the whole time. i can def tell this was my first fic ever. lol good lord, i was queen of the exclamation mark, that's for sure. geeez....

but awesome! i'm glad you liked it. i just re-read the one that comes after this one, too, for the first time in a while. i think you'll really enjoy that one;)