Comments | rjdoll2: 'The Voice' - a poem dedicated to Jeremy, with much love, always... xxxx

rjdoll2

'The Voice' - a poem dedicated to Jeremy, with much love, always... xxxx

Mar 24, 2009 13:13

Winds lash the moorings of my mind,
the storm brewing ever stronger as I lie still.
The magnitude of such things weighs heavy on me,
knowing full well nothing but you will satiate this hunger.

Impossible I find the task without your presence.

My champion, the master who knows me all too well,
awakening feelings I had hidden from the ( Read more... )

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Comments 18

dilletante2 March 24 2009, 18:21:36 UTC

very beautiful

rjdoll2 March 27 2009, 11:36:00 UTC

Thank you very much, my dear friend! ^_^

One word.. willowtreedance March 24 2009, 18:38:39 UTC

Wow

Re: One word.. rjdoll2 March 27 2009, 11:36:49 UTC

Happy you liked it, and thank you, dear Rebeccawilde! :)

nunewesen March 24 2009, 18:44:06 UTC

"I am..."

Oh, you know how much I love your poetry, don't you?

H&L

rjdoll2 March 27 2009, 11:38:43 UTC

I'm very happy that you do, and thank you again for all your help, support, and friendship, my dear! ":) I appreciate it very much. Thank you! ^_^

happy_lizard March 24 2009, 19:37:35 UTC

*is speechless*

I am staring at the computer after reading this and the only words I can manage to string together are "I understand this implicitly."

*reads again*

rjdoll2 March 27 2009, 11:43:09 UTC

You couldn't have said anything more touching than "I understand this implicitly"! :)
That means so much to me, as I really try to make the connection between Jeremy, the reader and my own feelings as personal as possible. So, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
What a lovely comment, my dear Happy Lizard! ^_^ Most appreciated indeed.

wirral_bagpuss March 24 2009, 21:57:59 UTC

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!! That was a hymn !! It's beautiful and so intense and powerful !! Cor !!! I'l have to read this a few times for the full meaning of this to hit me but wow what a poem !

I do hope Jeremy does come to you!! Funnily enough in work today i was muttering darkly at my computer which is hopeless and i uttered quitely *come to me!!* and i laughed outloud realising i had sad this without realising it and immediately thought of Jeremy!!! :)

Thank you !!! xx

rjdoll2 March 27 2009, 11:47:25 UTC

I am speechless! Wow, my friend.
You know it means so much to me when someone who loves Jeremy as much as you do enjoys my Jeremy dedications. It really does. My heartfelt thanks for such a beautiful comment!!!

I believe it is more like I 'go to him', but yes, Jeremy is with me always...

How I love to hear him say 'come to me'. :)

Many thanks again! ^_^