Yeah, I call my first drafts "how NOT to write this story," which means it gets a lot of the obvious and unworkable stuff out of the way, freeing me to get even more creative than I usually would when I come back to it for the rewrite.
I get just the same feeling with my translations. For the first draft I churn out as much as I can - including multiple meanings of words or phrases if I can't decided which one will do, rude comments about the plot, notes to self to check things...
It looks awful... And yet, given enough time and polishing, you can get a convincing final version out of it all.
Yeah, any new approach is scary. I'm so used to growing my story from a tiny seed and seeing it branch out in unexpected directions, and only finding out at the very end what kind of plot it really is (even though that often means I have to do a lot of pruning)... whereas this method feels more like I'm building a house with Lego, while looking at the instructions all the while. Efficient it may be, but I'm still not sure I like it!
But I really appreciate the encouragement -- thanks so much. And yay for you, too! I think this FDE thing has been great and I hope it continues.
I haven't gotten to the revising stage yes. I got distracted by another plot bunny for "Fairborn" and that's occupied me for more than a year now. However, I was pleased after NaNo ended that I did have the story down and out and revising should be easier when I do get around to it. Yes, the writing quality is not what I would like, but still, the bones are there. Muscles and organs will come later.
Thanks for sharing the thought that the first draft is really more like a 300-page outline. I've felt like this might be the case with my WIP, and it's heartening to know that published professionals feel this way, too. Because, the thing is, I know my WIP has some redeeming qualities that I'm hoping I can mold and sculpt into something really great...but right now, it sucks!
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Just think, though. Rewriting will be so much more satisfying, having gone through this. (At least, so I've found.)
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It looks awful... And yet, given enough time and polishing, you can get a convincing final version out of it all.
Be strong!
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But I really appreciate the encouragement -- thanks so much. And yay for you, too! I think this FDE thing has been great and I hope it continues.
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The good side though, is that, as you mention, you'll have an outline and the revising process should be easier.
Good luck!
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