Comments | rj_anderson: FIC: "A Man of His Word" (Alias, S/V, Sweiss, PG)

rj_anderson

FIC: "A Man of His Word" (Alias, S/V, Sweiss, PG)

Jun 28, 2004 07:51

Well, here it is, my entry in the Weiss Ficathon. Written for aricadavidson, who asked for Action!Weiss, and Syd/Weiss friendship or romance. Now how could I refuse a request like that?

( FIC: A Man of His Word )

eric weiss is love, alias, fanfic

Comments 18

lunasky June 29 2004, 14:05:58 UTC

Aw. I just love your Weiss voice. His dry humour, his prayer at the beginning, and then his integrity towards Sydney and Vaughn at the end.

Very nicely done.

rj_anderson June 29 2004, 17:33:50 UTC

Thank you!

vilandra25 July 4 2004, 13:22:02 UTC

I know it sounds cliche, but I absolutely adore the style of your writing. The way you elaborated on the apparently-abandoned brainwashing plotline worked wonderfully, and I love how that scenario opened us up to this Weiss--strong, supportive of everyone in his life, but pushing aside what matters to him. The conversation near the end was chilling--Weiss almost offended when Vaughn tells him to take over with Sydney. Wonderful, and heartfelt, and very genuine.

Amazing job. :)

rj_anderson July 4 2004, 17:48:41 UTC

I know it sounds cliche, but I absolutely adore the style of your writing.

That's a cliche? Well, I guess I must really like cliches, then! :) Thanks a lot for the kind words -- I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!

celli July 8 2004, 11:59:38 UTC

I loved every word of this. I was giggling at the prayer, I almost jumped in my chair when I realized it was Vaughn shooting at him, and then I spent the rest of the fic just wanting to hug Weiss. He's such a good guy! And in the best way, too. One of the things I love about him is the way he doesn't sacrifice himself for his friends in an unhealthy way. He's still got a strong sense of self-preservation.

This is SO good. :)

rj_anderson July 19 2004, 09:54:13 UTC

Thank you, thank you! Sorry to have taken so long to acknowledge your review -- it's very much appreciated!

resmin July 9 2004, 08:22:27 UTC

Wonderfully off-kilter look at the relationship between Weiss/Vaughn and how Syd interacts with them both. My favorite bit was Weiss' conversation with himself about Syd losing herself. He's not the only one that thinks that way! Thanks for writing.

clannadlvr October 29 2004, 22:36:18 UTC

Ooooohhhh lovely!

I found this off a rec page and just had to comment. I think it's wonderful and so in character for Eric to respect Sydney as a person, instead of a commodity to pass around.

I'm so glad I got to read this!