As they're staring out the window, Jensen comes stumbling down the stairs, heels of his palms pressed to his eyes, stops at the second to last step and stares at Jared. Blinks and stretches and acts like he might not be completely with it, as if he's trying to wake up. Jared stares back steadily, probably wouldn't be able to look away even if the roof was about to cave in on him
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june-bug!!!!! i love the quote-y comments and you are spoiling me here! thank you! ♥
(and i'll tell you something--there was a scene that was incomplete and not working out for me and therefore cut, when jensen tells jared that the best part of his day, every single day, is at night when they're getting ready to go to sleep and jared hasn't said anything about leaving, so jensen knows for sure that he has at least two more days. i just couldn't get it to read right, but think about it as being in there somewhere, in every incomplete sentence they mutter to each other).
I am enjoying your story so much. This fandom has been around for such a very long time and there have been so many great stories written over the years. Lately, I don't find as much to settle in with, but this is definitely such a story. Thank you for all your hard work. I'm loving every minute of it. Off now to part two. :)
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As they're staring out the window, Jensen comes stumbling down the stairs, heels of his palms pressed to his eyes, stops at the second to last step and stares at Jared. Blinks and stretches and acts like he might not be completely with it, as if he's trying to wake up. Jared stares back steadily, probably wouldn't be able to look away even if the roof was about to cave in on him ( ... )
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(and i'll tell you something--there was a scene that was incomplete and not working out for me and therefore cut, when jensen tells jared that the best part of his day, every single day, is at night when they're getting ready to go to sleep and jared hasn't said anything about leaving, so jensen knows for sure that he has at least two more days. i just couldn't get it to read right, but think about it as being in there somewhere, in every incomplete sentence they mutter to each other).
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