fic: The Flesh is Weak

[riyku]

Title:The Flesh is Weak
Genre: J2
Rating: nc-17
Word Count: 2400
Notes: written for smpc. many, many thanks to my darling flawlessglitch for always having my back and telling me when i need to fuck off and get over myself. warnings for heresy, flagellation and bloodplay.

The frighteningly talented and ever so patient and wonderful a_biting_smile came a-knocking and suggested we

Comments

[anonymous]

Wow. This was beyond hot. Love His worry-lines relax and the guilt has melted away, replaced by something peaceful, a light so bright and heartbreaking that Jared can barely stand to look at him.
Thanks for sharing!

[jj1564]

Wow, this is an amazing fic, every line is beautiful, evocative and sad. I love this...

Jared has faith. He believes in things he cannot see, in saints long buried and a god that is benevolent and fearsome. But Jensen is right here, warm and vital and so beautiful that Jared staggers at the sight of him, has to bite the inside of his cheek and sways as his whole body pulses with need.

The fact that they have to punish themselves for their love is so sad, as is Jensen needing it to hurt - "The penance has to exist within the sin."

I had to look up what a cilice is, ouch! I just can't understand why anyone would hurt themselves like this, or why they would think God would expect them to. I love how caring Jared is of Jensen, telling him to loosen the cilice and worrying about him not eating.

The last paragraph is just brilliant.

[nomercles]

Damn. It's so many of my kinks all in one place! You're my favorite person!

[aerynsun5]

Oh, my. Completely beautiful. So glad I always take Junie's recs.

[sleepypercy]

This is so fucking amazing, just from the first line to the last. It's hard and hurting and so, so beautiful.