fic: love or death, grab an end, pull hard, and make a wish

Aug 21, 2015 07:16

Title: love or death, grab an end, pull hard, and make a wish
Genre: Jared/Jensen AU
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2300
Warnings: serial killer AU, with all the trappings thereof-violence, murder, gore.
Notes: written for salt_burn_porn, for cherie_morte's prompt rattling locks. Not only did she give me a great prompt, but also stepped up when I was having doubts and told me I ( Read more... )

fic: j2, rated: nc-17

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locknkey August 21 2015, 15:23:04 UTC
I love the intensity of this - both of Jensen's capability/needs/persona and the love/obsession they have together. Every word was packed with emotion and subtext and you managed to include a rich history with very few words. I adore twisted sick obsessive boys that have gone down the rabbit hole together and this was a great version of that! :)

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riyku August 24 2015, 11:55:53 UTC
Such kind feedback, D, thank you so very much. It's lovely to know that Jensen's history bled through the cracks in my desperate, middle of the night writing, and I'm happy to know that he comes across as capable without being overly cocky. Very happy you enjoyed this!

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cherie_morte August 21 2015, 15:39:54 UTC
*throws self on every available surface* HE JUST NEEDED TO GET BACK TO HIS DARLING BOY, KC.

A shot to the base of the skull is more humane than the sheriff deserves after the son of a bitch took him away from Jared for so long - this is what i came for.

His heartbeat was 60 trapped inside with the cops and 100 as soon as he was with Jared. I mean. *__________*

I think the "I always wanted to fuck a famous person." line remains the treasure. JARED FUCKING PADALECKI.

AUGH, SERIAL KILLER JENSEN EVERY DAY EVERY DAY. I WOULD SAY MORE ABOUT HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS BUT I FEEL LIKE YOU'VE HEARD ALL MY GARBLED SOUNDS SO MANY TIMES AT THIS POINT.

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riyku August 24 2015, 11:59:48 UTC
*drags you up* *sits you down* *hands you a glass of water*

Thank you so much for listening to my hair-brained ideas about this thing while we were driving through what was frankly a startling lack of cornfields in the middle of nowhere a couple of weeks ago, and thank you again for enabling whatever this thing turned out to be with such a fantastic, open-ended prompt, and then staying up past your bedtime to set my nerves at ease.

In conclusion, JARED FUCKING PADALECKI.

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hunters_retreat August 21 2015, 15:52:03 UTC
Amazing! Love the darker side of Jensen and how Jared was as much a part of that darkness. Love when Jared asks if he's safe and Jensen's answer! Love this whole thing so much! Thank you for sharing!

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riyku August 24 2015, 12:01:32 UTC
Dark boys are pretty much my favorite thing, and dark boys who would gladly watch the world burn if it means they can still have each other is my favorite, FAVORITE thing, so this whole fic was pretty much self indulgence on my part. So thrilled you liked this. Thanks a million!

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all_the_damned August 21 2015, 16:16:17 UTC
Homosexual murderers! So glad these two crazy kids found each other. I love this trope and you do it really well.
P.s. Strangely disappointed that Jared wasn't a greenhorn deputy that Jensen abducted, but that's prob just my abduction!kink talking.

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riyku August 24 2015, 12:03:08 UTC
You know what? There was this instant where I actually considered making Jared a deputy, but then something in me really wanted to put Jared in the getaway car... so happy you liked this. Thank you!

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lotrspnfangirl August 21 2015, 17:36:12 UTC
This was perfection. So fucked and twisted and poetic and perfect. I didn't realize how much I needed this until right now.

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riyku August 24 2015, 12:04:03 UTC
It's great to know that this scratched an itch! Thank you so much for the lovely note!

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