Comments | riyku: fic: Freak Show

riyku

fic: Freak Show

Mar 02, 2014 09:55

Title: Freak Show
Genre: Jared/Jensen Historical AU
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3600
Notes: Written for smpc, and very much inspired by my recent reading of Angela Carter’s Nights at the Circus. Warnings for wing!kink, barebacking, mild comeplay.

Summary: The circus comes to town and brings a surprise or two with it.

( Freak Show )

smpc, fic: j2, rated: nc-17

Comments 81

ex1led_nyer March 2 2014, 17:34:49 UTC

l think what I love most about this story, which has so much to love, is how turned-on Jensen is. He's in control from the outset but still so very clearly wanting Jared. And now they're going to be together for many more sexytimes. Hurray!

riyku March 4 2014, 12:50:35 UTC

Happy to see you pick up on that. I have this backstory in my head about Jensen getting rejected and exiled over and over, so when he sees someone who accepts him, he wants to hold onto that person. Thanks very much for the note!

deirdre_c March 2 2014, 19:21:08 UTC

So, so, SO FANTASTIC.

“I’ve always wanted a biographer, but no one would ever believe you. I would read like fiction.”

Damn, what a perfect line. The whole thing is perfect! *_*

riyku March 4 2014, 12:52:15 UTC

That line was actually a happy accident. My original thought was 'It would read like fiction,' but then on my second pass I noticed that the typo read so much better. Thanks so much, dei!

deirdre_c March 5 2014, 14:06:14 UTC

Isn't that the coolest thing? It happens to me in vidding all the time where I'm like, "Wow. How did that happen!" Serendipity, ILY!!

Your writing = ♥

adameyezd March 2 2014, 19:42:11 UTC

This was just so beautiful to me (& of course hot too!).

It is perfect as it is, but I just can't help desperately yearning for more.

Thank you so much for writing this.

riyku March 4 2014, 13:19:38 UTC

It's lovely to hear that you like this! That you'd like to hear more out of these two is a wonderful compliment. Many, many thanks!

strive2bhappy March 2 2014, 20:12:14 UTC

god, the sweetheart and beautiful just about did me in. and why you always gotta scare me like that in the end????

i love everything you write and the descriptions of jensen here were so vivid. this was awesome, as always.

<3

riyku March 4 2014, 13:21:38 UTC

Of course I gotta scare you in the end! Really though, I'm such a sucker for a happy ending, or at least a very ambiguous, choose-your-own-adventure ending, that you never need to worry.

Thank you so much for the kind note on my writing. You've totally made my day!

equally_dour March 2 2014, 23:53:47 UTC

Oh my, that was gorgeous!

riyku March 4 2014, 13:21:57 UTC

Thanks so much! Very happy you liked this!