fic: Night Shift

[riyku]

Title: Night Shift
Genre: Jared/Jensen AU
Rating: nc-17
Word Count: 2600
Summary/Prompt: Jared is a hooker, Jensen is an undercover cop on a sting.
Notes: For juice817, for her wonderful prompt over yonder at the little kinky comment meme. In the spirit of the meme, please feel free to comment anonymously.

Comments

[sagetan]

Oh, that ending is killer! I enjoyed this a lot. I particularly loved the part about Jensen suddenly seeing Jared as a person, that was lovely.

[riyku]

Thanks, sagetan! The last line popped into my head as soon as I saw the prompt, and I had to build the rest of the story around it. So glad the ending did the trick. ♥!

[cherie_morte]

OHHH MYYYY GOOOOODDDDD. MY HEEAAARRRTTTTT. JARED THE HAPPY HOOKER NEEDS 984948357489574389 MORE WORDS, OKAY? I JUST. HE KNEEEWWWWW. HE KNEWWWWW. AND THEN HE KISSED JENSEN'S CHEEK. HISSS CHEEEK. And I love that the jeans bounce is the moment that made him human for Jensen. SO SO HUMAN, OH GOD.

IASGUHJOFDHGIJFSDOH. WHY IS THIS NOT EVERYTHING ON MY EYEBALLS EVER????

[riyku]

984948357489574389 more words you say? But but BUT I DON'T KNIOW THOSE WORDS!!!!??!!!! Of course Jared knew, and I like to think that something in Jensen wanted to get caught. And oh yes, the pants bounce. You know that bounce. There's just something so intimate about seeing someone get dressed, y'know? About being privy to certain little habits surrounding it.

Thanks, cherie!

[linvro21]

Oo, I love me some cop/hooker fic!
And Jared not being down and out, and Jensen in doubt.
Just perfect :)

[riyku]

So glad you liked this--it was a lot of fun to write! Thanks very much for the note!

[ferrous_wheeler]

This is great! I don't know why, but for some reason I kept thinking that Jared was undercover too, like really, really deep undercover lol! Like everybody else, would love to read more! :)

[riyku]

for some reason I kept thinking that Jared was undercover too Ohhhh, now wouldn't that be interesting! It's such a compliment to know that you'd like to hear more out of this story. Very glad you liked this. Thanks!

[linvro21]

Heh, that's what I was thinking too :)

[timian]

Yes! This! Jared rifling through Jensen's pockets, already knowing exactly what he'd find... That's total professional sex salesperson (oh god, what's the polite way to say this nowadays?), but it could also be Jared the Undercover Federal Agent or whatever, investigating human trafficking and kind of enjoying his job more than his superiors ever intended him to. ::cough::

Yeah. I loved this!

[amberdreams]

How did you pack so many layers into so few words?! Of course now the simply have to meet again, somehow, somewhere...

[riyku]

Man oh man. I can't write commentfic to save my soul. I promised myself that I'd go to 1k, maybe 1.5 tops, and really blew it out of the water. What is brevity? What does it mean?

Thanks for the note!

[amberdreams]

Ha ha well I thought it was brief, but what do I know... I only seem to be able to write drabbles or 10k+...