Yay for SugaPark!

Feb 27, 2014 01:08

Title: Brittle Gaze
Fandom: BTS/Bangtan Boys/Bulletproof Boyscouts/Whatever they call themselves
Pairing(s): Jimin/Suga
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Smoking, dealing with school stress
Summary: Yoongi is everything Jimin is not, Jimin is everything Yoongi should be
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ext_2452899 February 27 2014, 03:23:06 UTC
You are an absolutely incredible writer, I was completely captivated haha. I hope you will continue, this is beautiful

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rixythewraith February 27 2014, 11:59:00 UTC
Thank you so much I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I have no plans to stop writing anytime soon >.

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mhn77 July 4 2014, 13:41:47 UTC
this was actually what led me from aff to you today cos I hadn't read this before?! probably cos when I first spared Bangtan a second glance I was pretty dnw about Jimin, but that all changed and these days he's occupying waaaay too much of my head space without getting permission 8(

I really love your characters and how they're so different but still Jimin sees something.
and the way they stay the same, I really like how you don't have Jimin make Yoongi a diligent student all of a sudden, even though he'd probably like to for Yoongi's sake.
and also..idk how to explain it properly, but the way you've set it up with the time jumps? without making it super obvious and over explained that now time has passed, but it's just clear for how the story evolves.

it's a little hard to explain lol but point being, I really like this. I hope you'll do more Sugapark in the future, if for nothing else then cos your pairing name is super cute! lol

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rixythewraith August 16 2014, 01:08:30 UTC
Jimin gets to everyone eventually! I think he starts out at the botto of most people's bias lists but then he slowly works his way up :P

I debated having some magical turn around for Yoongi but in the end falling in love shouldn't be about changing for someone or changing someone for you, it should be about accepting people for who they are and still making their lives better which is why I decided to keep the same Yoongi, but a happier Yoongi ^^

And thank you so much for all these compliments wow really you're too kind <3

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mellowsound January 12 2015, 19:28:21 UTC
omg i love your writing style! this was a really nice read.

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rixythewraith January 13 2015, 15:27:04 UTC
Thank you!!

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