Choices And Consequences

[rix_scaedu]

I wrote this to ysabetwordsmith's fourth prompt.  It follows on from Forewarning.

Birgenes hadn’t told anyone where he was going, what he was doing or why.  He had a real fear that if he did, he’d be stopped and detained.  As a religious candidate, former religious candidate in his own mind, there was a real chance he’d wind up in a corrective retreat being

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Yay!

[ysabetwordsmith]

This is really cool. I love the trap scene.

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[rix_scaedu]

I thought that it was intersdting that once she knew where they were, she expected there to be traps.

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[ysabetwordsmith]

Precisely. It's amusing when people know something, but not all by the same name.

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[rix_scaedu]

That was a temple that wasn't abandoned before it was overwhelmed by their Flood. You have to wonder if they defused one trap by being polite...

Read "Choices and Consequences"

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[technoshaman]

Ooooh. Now you've got me curious as to what's going to happen to the brothers - why Birgenes took pity on them :)

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[rix_scaedu]

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

This is not going how they expected...

[kelkyag]

Heh. A bit of distortion in the observing and telling ...

I think I'm most curious about the Thirteenth Swordlord, but that's only one of many interesting-looking threads.

[rix_scaedu]

Thank you. I was thinking of writing lunch too, and then I thought about how many words that would take...

[kelkyag]

Maybe the next section?