End Of A Way Of Life, Part 3

Apr 26, 2016 14:17

This follows on from End Of A Way Of Life, Part 1 and End Of A Way Of Life, Part 2 and runs to 2,388 words.

In the morning it was time for her grandmother’s lizards to be moved and there was a great deal of frenetic activity resulting from a young drake deciding that it was time to be inquisitive and making a break for freedom. Bethany retrieved ( Read more... )

dragon lizards, lord korne, prompt request 150613, bethany, laptop funding1

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kelkyag April 26 2016, 05:21:18 UTC
Moar, please?

ETA: taking cuttings or digging up roots of every single dragon lizard related plant on the farm -- some of which require licenses to grow, IIRC, which Bethany probably doesn't hold herself if her grandmother has been keeping her from getting properly licensed as a dragon lizard breeder. Or maybe the licenses were for the farm rather than the breeder, and Lord Korne has such for his estate?

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thnidu April 26 2016, 05:48:43 UTC
I second the motion!!

More typofoolery:

• blocking in a section ^ verge parking for their trucks
^ of

• Mr Mc Gordon kept his tone neutral.
→ McGordon
> No space, as elsewhere.

• ”then it’s current practice
→ “then it’s
> Open-quote.

And I had to look up "offsider".

• was Crown Land and reverts to Crown land
→ to Crown Land

• His Majesty strolled over to ^ Aimwrights
?^ the

• “So, just how accurate do you hope your records are?”
> Heh, heh, heh!!

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rix_scaedu April 26 2016, 08:12:16 UTC
All fixed I think! Thank you for that.

I swear I fixed the McGordon one before, but maybe there were two of them...

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aldersprig April 26 2016, 13:10:01 UTC
I third the motion for moar!
Shall we take up a collection? :-D :-D

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aldersprig April 26 2016, 13:11:20 UTC
Let's see, fascinating to find out her parents are noble - this is, not quite a theme, but a recurring trope with you and I enjoy it.
I wish I could write overbearing matriarchs half as well as you and I may very well try.
I want to know more about these dragonets.

Well done Mr. King terrifying the mayor and getting egg on the magistrate's wife's face.

Where's the magistrate?

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rix_scaedu April 26 2016, 17:18:15 UTC
Her father was born noble and her mother was made noble. :) Her mother wasn't noble when she was born.

The magistrate is, as far as I know, off being a magistrate, presiding over cases at the local court.

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aldersprig April 26 2016, 17:20:18 UTC
What's he going to think when he finds out how much trouble his wife has caused, in part using his authority as her weapon?

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rix_scaedu April 26 2016, 18:10:34 UTC
Aside from the head clutching?

He doesn't care about the not being received at Court, because he never was but she could adversely affected his career...

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tuftears April 26 2016, 19:25:46 UTC
Always read the fine print. :)

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rix_scaedu April 26 2016, 19:40:32 UTC
Especially when it's pointed out to you!

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kunama_wolf April 27 2016, 21:54:13 UTC
Ha.
Is this the 6000+ word piece you've been trying to slavedrive yourself to write?
It needs an entry on your landing page.

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rix_scaedu April 27 2016, 22:16:15 UTC
It is and it does. Particularly as there are now three stories in this world.

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kelkyag April 27 2016, 22:22:21 UTC
Three? There's the earlier one about these characters, and ... which other?

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rix_scaedu April 27 2016, 22:41:44 UTC
There's the one about the mage who needs to start looking for a new familiar.

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