A Day On The Farm

Oct 06, 2015 04:24

I wrote this as the first participation bonus for the Prompt Request. It is written to the only unwritten prompt, Anonymous' " A story about breeding magical animals." It came in at 1,672 words.

Bethany had been up all night in the hatchery. There were rarely problems, but it never hurt to have a set of working fingers and opposable thumbs on ( Read more... )

dragon lizards, lord korne, bethany, laptop funding1

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tuftears October 5 2015, 18:23:53 UTC
'Bethany was felt and was sounding quite worried'? And there's an errant 'n' which is probably an 'in' just above that.

Mushroom picking is so fraught with peril. :)

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rix_scaedu October 5 2015, 20:20:36 UTC
Thank you. The errant 'was' has been wrangled and 'in' is now restored and fully functional.

Yes, if you don't know exactly what it is, don't pick it.

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kiarrith October 5 2015, 21:40:37 UTC
and frequently they have very minute differences...

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rix_scaedu October 5 2015, 21:52:57 UTC
Such as a slight colour shading that develops as they get older.

Or bioluminescence that was only obvious after dark (I don't know what they were but I was told about that one some years after it happened.)

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kelkyag October 5 2015, 22:34:55 UTC
Oh, dear. Well, the magistrate's wife is about to get an exciting and necessary lesson or three ... I wonder what she'll learn?

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rix_scaedu October 6 2015, 01:48:52 UTC
One could hope that it'll be not to go onto someone else's property without permission, but some people...

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sauergeek October 10 2015, 22:23:23 UTC
Her lesson may involve a gravestone, or a trip to the hospital involving a liver transplant, if she or her friend ate any of the mushrooms. Worse, in either case, if the magistrate is vindictive, grandmother may find herself on the short end of an investigation into the injury done to her or her friend.

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rix_scaedu October 10 2015, 23:15:39 UTC
There is another story in this series underway....

(Why did I call it a series and not a sequel?)

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