Discussion And Declaration

Oct 27, 2012 09:36

I wrote this to aldersprig's sixth prompt.

They had lunch in a small place that did three dishes to a plate for a fixed price from a bain-marie.  Most of the shop’s trade was takeaway and there was a brisk turnover.  They both paid their money, made their selections and with unspoken consent picked a table against the wall that gave both seats a view of the ( Read more... )

mayin, oberxiao huhn jan-li, prompt request oct 12

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tuftears October 26 2012, 22:45:25 UTC
But eliminating your rivals is sure to win her heart over!...

Or maybe not.

^_^

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rix_scaedu October 26 2012, 23:11:22 UTC
Or leave you as the only game in town.

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tuftears October 26 2012, 23:15:55 UTC
Sometimes in games, the only way to win is not to play! >_>

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lilfluff October 26 2012, 22:46:05 UTC
Yes, I'd say that's a good thing to know before marriage. :) On the other hand, a husband who knows that seems likely to be a husband who wants to keep his wife happy. Throw in that he believes she's the key to his luck...

Now whether she is interested at all, that's another question. Still... :)

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rix_scaedu October 26 2012, 23:11:52 UTC
It is, isn't it?

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kelkyag October 27 2012, 06:25:08 UTC
I think she may need some time to recover her equilibrium before she starts seriously pondering that question ...

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rix_scaedu October 27 2012, 06:35:31 UTC
Yes, indeed. :)

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jeriendhal October 27 2012, 00:30:10 UTC
Someone needs to notify Cordelia Vorkosigan that her services as a baba are needed.

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rix_scaedu October 27 2012, 02:40:12 UTC
This is the wrong universe for that! (can you imagine a running commentary from her husband?)

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rix_scaedu October 27 2012, 06:37:50 UTC
I was just rereading this and had a vision of Aral Vorkosigan and the ambassador sorting it all out behind the backs of the happy couple and Cordelia. Permitted weapons may have been discussed.

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kelkyag October 27 2012, 06:25:41 UTC
Hysterical last paragraph, as a topper to an exceedingly awkward conversation ...

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rix_scaedu October 27 2012, 06:34:30 UTC
It was a difficult conversation, wasn't it? But at least she knows what his intentions are...

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aldersprig May 20 2015, 14:45:55 UTC
This is FULL of twist lines, I love it!

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