Comments | rivulet027: Fic: Learning to Be a Team (Preseries iS, Zhane and Andros centric)

rivulet027

Fic: Learning to Be a Team (Preseries iS, Zhane and Andros centric)

May 23, 2010 21:59

Title: Learning to Be a Team ( Read more... )

slash, everyoneaccountedforseries, fic:powerrangers, learningtobeateam

Comments 4

pockythoughts May 24 2010, 02:35:41 UTC

Augh, Zhane! *beats him over the head* B|

Loving the idea of a telepathic bond between Andros and Karone, and the potential consequences thereof. Sure explains a lot about his mental state.

rivulet027 May 24 2010, 04:21:15 UTC

Zhane can get frustrating in this, but he's a bit cocky so he's going to do his own thing.

Glad you liked the telepathic bond concept. Was hoping that would go over well.

serpentine85 May 25 2010, 07:49:30 UTC

I really like how you've portrayed Zhane's relationship with his parents in this chapter and how Karone's disapearance affected him, as well as the continued development of the current team's dynamic now that Andros has joined them.

Really enjoyed this installment (still loving Lori btw) and looking forward to more :D

rivulet027 May 26 2010, 00:37:36 UTC

:) I tried to put a lot in this chapter and was surprised when it came out so short. So glad you're still enjoying it!