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megthelegend September 25 2008, 22:04:10 UTC
Oh, very good!! I love Adam, SO much. And the kids are perfect. Poor Kira's hair. ::g::

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rivulet027 September 26 2008, 01:27:33 UTC
:) Thank you...I'm always worried I'm not showing enough of the kids and their crazy antics.

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m14mouse September 26 2008, 02:00:06 UTC
So, Chip/V part is all my fault, huh? Anytime. ^____^ But little Dustin is soooo cute. Dustin and Kira moment made me smile. I bet Dustin would have a hard time to tell Sensai that he was dating his son. I imagine a lot of sweating and rambling. XD Blake rocks...he knew how to stop the silly fight from starting. Poor other children...they are outnumbered by reds...I can imagine that driving them nuts.

Bad ass Adam! Whoa! Kira would hug him to make him to feel better. Anyway, great work! ::Waves her little flag.:: You can finish it! Yes, you can!

^___^

P.S: Kim+Maddie+Scissors=Bad.

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rivulet027 September 26 2008, 02:20:08 UTC
Oh yes...scissors are bad in the hands of the young. Eep...your image of Dustin having to tell Sensei makes me want to write it. Glad you liked my little Blake. Yeah on the too many red thing. I honestly didn't realize how many I had there until I wrote down my plotting and went wait...just how many reds am I including?

And well I was leaning towards the Chip/V while watching MF so I guess it's not totally your fault...but you're fab stories and excitement for them difinently pushed me in that dirrection so yeah you get some blame. :)

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m14mouse September 26 2008, 03:03:48 UTC
::Gives her a puppy dog look.:: That would be great if you wrote that. Because Cam would finally be the one to tell his dad because Dustin goes on some non-stop rambling thing. XD Althought, Cam would highly amused by the cute Dustin's ramblings.

YAY! My fault! ^___^

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arytra September 26 2008, 06:50:53 UTC
So cute! So much love! I love it so much!

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rivulet027 September 29 2008, 16:07:15 UTC
:) Thanks you! It's been fun to write so far.

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serpentine85 September 26 2008, 10:39:14 UTC
Yaaay! *LOVING* this fic. Lots of Adam is always fantastic and I adore ickle Shane and Hunter.Update soon ple-ee-ase!

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rivulet027 September 29 2008, 16:08:20 UTC
Thank you. Blame my girl for the lots of Adam...I do. lol Glad you're liking the Shane and Hunter as the scene with them was unplanned and just sort of worked its way in there.

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