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megthelegend July 22 2008, 03:02:26 UTC
LOVELY. I am SO glad you posted more of this story! I love the slashiness, the cuddling, the poor Bridge turning into everyone else plus COFFEE, the humour -- VERY GOOD!

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rivulet027 July 22 2008, 05:01:17 UTC
Thank you! :) Somehow I think they'll work on keeping poor Bridge from the caffiene in the future...and oh yes to slashiness...Xander is so bi in this and tends to flirt with everyone. Glad you enjoyed it!

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arytra July 22 2008, 07:45:09 UTC
I love your Xander, first of all. I was always thinking that I couldn't really decide if Xander was straight or gay that I didn't even think about him being bi. (A rather ironic twist considering that I am bi)

The characters flow together so well and I want more when I read it! And Bridge on coffee was great! I loved the relationships. All of it is just wonderful! I look forward to the next chapter.

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rivulet027 July 22 2008, 15:17:52 UTC
:) Thank you! Xander a source of much entertainment. Sometimes I think its difficult to figure out how you want to represent a chars sexuality...I don't know how many times I went to a gay club with this really great guy I worked with. And of course, even though everyone at work knew I was gay, they just assumed I was suddenly straight and he and I were dating...even though they knew we were going to a gay club. It never occured to any of my co-workers that he might be gay too. *shrugs*

I'm really glad you're liking the interactions and we had too much fun writing Bridge on a caffiene high...lol.

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m14mouse July 22 2008, 19:25:26 UTC
hehe...I <3 this team. The intereaction between them is just great. Half sleep Xander flirting with his other teammates was great. XD Maybe, that explains why Maddie, Chip, and V allows Xander to sleep in his chair most of the day at work...dealing with a very handsy Xander would probably drive them...and the cosumters nuts. XD

Bridge on coffee...scarey. I thought Dustin or Chip on sugar rush would be bad...But Bridge beats them hands down.

It is also nice to see Kat in the story. Most stories I have seen protray her...in a not so nice light. But...Yay for Kat.

Anyway, great work.

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rivulet027 July 23 2008, 16:40:44 UTC
:) Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it so far. Both Xander and Bridge have been fun to write and think of what we could put them through as the mission continues.

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