Baby's first RPF 1/2

Aug 31, 2010 19:20

Full Service Firm

Note: Here it goes, another wall I thought would never fall. CW RPF: J2, AU. Explicit.  Thanks to
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rpf, fanfic by me

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keerawa September 3 2010, 21:03:37 UTC
Oh man. Poor workaholic Jensen.

Also, apparently Jensen had overshot ‘wants to get laid’ by a country mile, which was … dispiriting. Maybe next time he’d skip the eyeliner.
No no, Jensen, the eyeliner is juuuuust right. And I'm sure thousands of fangirls would agree with me!

There's something oddly hot about how Jensen's billable rate and six-minute increments keeps transferring over to this scenario. The "Lick me clean," and Jensen's reaction to it, was very guh-worthy.

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rivkat September 3 2010, 22:01:44 UTC
No joke re: eyeliner. And I think workaholic Jensen just hadn't found a guy he was willing to modify his life for...

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rivkat September 4 2010, 04:30:50 UTC
Thank you!

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vodou_blue September 4 2010, 04:17:54 UTC
Love this line!:
…t-shirt that was either damp with sweat or with the drool of onlookers.

That sex scene? Guh! *thud* Will somebody please come dump a bucket of ice water on me? No, no - don’t scrape me off the floor; just leave me in a puddle right here and- I dunno, maybe call the fire department or something.

This made me laugh:
Jensen would have thought that everything involving Superman was interesting to other people, but, sadly, no.
I like Superman, in pretty much all of his incarnations, but I have to confess I’m not overly interested in the implications of the changes in the copyright laws. Although, I do actually understand what that means, and I do find it moderately interesting. LOL!

OMG! I am so totally loving this fic! Jensen’s inner voice is hysterical, and very endearing. *g*

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rivkat September 4 2010, 04:39:33 UTC
Thank you! I was happy with the drool line, and I'm glad it worked for you.

I am a bigger fan of copyright than of Superman, even, so I feel Jensen's pain there.

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jeeronie September 8 2010, 14:28:02 UTC
Weeeeeee, I really, really loved this.

I kept going "Oh, I hope this continues to be a misunderstanding for a while" and it did! and then "I hope he keeps the money and does nothing with it" and it did! and "I hope they do something wrong for a bit of angst" and they did and then I was all "Oh, this has been going so great there's no way it will have the happy ending I'm hoping for" but then it did!!!

So well written and with everything I like in this type of story.
*does happy dance*
Thank you :)

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rivkat September 8 2010, 14:35:37 UTC
Thank you! I tried to write everything I wanted to see in such a story, and I'm glad it worked for you.

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deadflowers5 September 12 2010, 21:01:22 UTC
Fantastic!

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rivkat September 12 2010, 21:05:01 UTC
Thank you!

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